Darkness and Daylight

Cordelia / Angel Fanfiction & Art by Lysa Whitmore

Scorch's Challenge Received 13 July 2003

Written & Posted Over the Course of 8 Months

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Thanks for reading!

COMMENTS & CRITIQUES & KUDOS

Author's Note:

 

Lots of gratitude to everyone who provided feedback whether by post, PM or email. I truly appreciate your kind words and criticisms. I had so much fun watching everyone debate about which 'Vamp Camp' you were in (Team Angel, Team Angelus, or Team Threesome) and who Cordelia needed to end up with. 

All you lurkers out there…smoochies to you too!

Huge thanks to Sunscorched for the awesome challenge, the encouragement, the hilarious feedback and her ability to kick my muse in the ass when I occasionally got stuck. 

The same huge thank you to Califi who must be a saint (slightly tarnished) for putting up with me when I needed a sounding board for my ideas.

Jude & Cali, you are both brilliant and talented and I thank you, thank you, thank you for all of your support on this fic.

Just one plea. Next time…challenge me to write a Standalone. 

There were 2 or 3 occasions when the Angel's Oasis board had a computer glitch and some FB was lost, including all of the FB posted within the first few days after the story finale. But, there is plenty here to read, and some of it is hilarious!

For your review: 

The Backbone of this Story is the Awesome Challenge by Sunscorched:
1) Buffy & Angel find a way around the curse by separating him from Angelus.
2) Angelus must agree to 'fight the good fight' and is monitored by the PTB.
3) Scooby Gang freaks out with Angelus running around. 
4) Angelus doesn't really care about the 'good fight', but ends up saving Cordelia one night. She is scared witless of the vamp. 
5) Angelus goes after Cordy in a big way...cards & flowers no less...in addition to doing anything he can to impress her. 
6) Hot, steamy C/Aus results.
7) B/A starts to deteriorate despite sex no longer being an issue d/t mistrust and the slayer/vampire dynamic.
8) The following scenes have to be included:

  • Buffy and Cordelia meeting in the mansion kitchen. Buffy is fully dressed, but Cordy is only in   Angelus' robe.
  • Angel runs into the bedroom after hearing Cordelia screaming.
  • Angel & Angelus walking in the library together, Buffy running up to Angelus thinking he's Angel. He pushes her away in disgust. Cordy can tell them apart, but Buffy can't.

9) The rest is up to you.   

Posted by SUNSCORCHED

 

I. Love. You.

Thanks for taking this challenge.

I really wanted to see Cordelia smack Angel for acting like a jerk, hell I wanted to smack Angel for acting like a jerk! Well done, waiting impatiently for the next installment and hope you're enjoying writing this as I know it's going to be entertaining!

 


Posted by CALIFI

 

Have you a link to SS' challenge? The only one I've found is A/Aus set in ATS...and, if I'm reading it right, you mention there is gonna be two of them??

Confused- so a link would be really appreciated!

Besides that, love it [tho B/A fest always makes me wanna barf, sorry!- but I love they way you write so much, that i can't keep away! ]

Thanks,

Calx 

Posted by IMPRESS

 

Ok, first off, B/A...*SHUDDER & MAJOR ICK*

Ok, now that that is out of the way. I'm enjoying this story. Can't wait to see Angelus and Cordy interacting.

Posted by RACHELLE

 

Ah, this is good. Two of them??? And they are both going to fall for our girl... right Nothing for Buffy! 

Posted by RUBY

 

Ok so wow!!!!

This was such a cool start!!!

I am already hooked really bad so you better be updating soon!!!

The B/A thing was icky but it was well written!!

Please update soon!!! -pouts- Pretty please with a naked Angel on top?

Ruby

 


Posted by LIZZY

 

Lysa, you seriously rock. I love this. Really love it. Thank you, Sunscorched for the very interesting challenge and a huge thanks to you, Lysa, for writing it. I can't wait for the next part. *sigh*

Posted by FRAZI

 

Oh droool! Can we say chemistry Hehe! i can't wait to see what you come up with next! Soon? 

Posted by DAMNSKIPPY

 

             This is fantastic. I'm not normally a huge Aus fan, but I have to see him courting Cordy. This should be pretty dang entertaining. Post soon!!

Posted by PSYCHOFILLY

 

This has a good premise, as long as it doesn't turn into a Buffy-bashing, wish fulfillment, Cordy is the "bestest" of the two girls, kind of story.

You have a great opportunity to mine the angst and have a lot of fun, as well as deliver some good smut. I'll just have to have confidence that you can keep it balanced. You are a good writer, it shouldn't be hard 

Posted by IMPRESS

 

If you read the challenge, you'll see that B/A isn't really going anywhere. So take their little scenes together will a grain of salt.



I second Califi's Phew. I have no doubt you'll be able to do justice to the B/A relationship and show that even without the curse, the relationship would never have made it. And all without turning it into

quote:


a Buffy-bashing, wish fulfillment, Cordy is the "bestest" of the two girls, kind of story.

 


Posted by CALIFI

 

quote:


Originally posted by psychofilly
as long as it doesn't turn into a Buffy-bashing, wish fulfillment, Cordy is the "bestest" of the two girls, kind of story.




I do agree with this too; I just meant the smut. 

Posted by PSYCHOFILLY

 

It's okay Califi, I just detest seeing Buffy humiliated just to build up Cordy. Neither character need it, and I feel they can stand on their own and find conflict inherent in their natural strength and flaws. I never said that's what Lysa was going to do, but just as you guy's were expressing your hopes for the direction of the story so was I .

Believe me, C/A is where it's at, but well written and fair B/A can give a story depth and relevance that other stories by often times capable writers lack. Angel loved Buffy, and it *is* tricky pulling off believable C/A in BTVS, just as it is to pull of believable W/A. LOL, Angel was never portrayed as a man-ho on BTVS, so showing the attraction from his side takes a little work, especially for someone like Cordelia who wasn't one to put-out.

THAT'S where the fun can come in, because Cordy's no tramp, nor an easy lay. Angelus is going to have to work for it.

Again, I have confidence Lysa has the skill to pull it off. 

Posted by AMZ_da_ANGEL

 

quote:


Originally posted by psychofilly
THAT'S where the fun can come in, because Cordy's no tramp, nor an easy lay. Angelus is going to have to work for it.

Again, I have confidence Lysa has the skill to pull it off.


 


WORD!

Lysa, love that you have started a new story and like all the others, I *love* it!

And both Angel and Angelus? Whoa. Can't wait

And can I say the C/A scene, even though I felt like slapping Angel, that was *hot*!

Great job! Love it! 

Posted by LYSA

 

Ohhhh my! I do have my work cut out for me, don't I?

I have to agree that character bashing for the sake of an "I never liked so and so" is not the way to go with fan fiction. I find it so interesting to read responses from fellow readers to various fics and see where their POV is coming from. It's like my alternate endings to Promise of the Night...the responses were basically divided evenly between a Vamp Cordy/Angelus only ending, an Angel/Vamp Cordy ending and the Vamps with Souls ending.

I have to (hesitantly) admit that I actually like B/A fics in certain circumstances and settings. As long as they take place in the BTVS years and not after Angel has established a relationship with Cordy.

With this fic, I hope that I can avoid "Buffy Bashing". If anyone is going to get bashed, it's likely to be my poor evil vamp, Angelus who has to put up with Giles and the Scooby Gang. While many readers here at ST have an "ick factor" when it comes to B/A, keep in mind that to be true to the characters, you sometimes have to start with their beginnings in order to develop something new.

Everyone, thanks for your feedback and I love the extra discussion. Makes it all the more interesting.

__________________
~Lysa~

 


Posted by YODA-MIRA

 

OOh! Very interesting. Can't wait to read more. 

Posted by KIMMERS

 

loving this and wanting much more soon
from Kimmers

 


Posted by KATRINA

 

This was great. And I loved the little details included, like Cordy checking on Giles to make sure he is ok, but not letting anyone know. She had a good heart back then, even if it was more hidden than it is now. Can't wait for more.

 


Posted by NOBODY'S ANGEL

 

Great start Lysa! SS showed me the challenge and I've been eagerly awaiting this! Post more soon please!

Posted by LUNA

 

Great story! B/A-times are back! (eye-rolling and machine gun emojis)

Posted by KATRINA

 

Re: Double or Nothing / Part 5 [NC-17]

quote:


Originally posted by Lysa
“There was a time when you would have done the same,” Angelus derided him. “Playing lap dog to the Slayer has softened you. I think Buffy must have swallowed your balls the last time she went down on you.”

Angel was on his feet in seconds and standing nose to nose with his double just before he let his fist crash into Angelus’ face. “You fucking bastard!”

“Don’t talk about mom that way,” Angelus laughed while curling his hand into a large fist. He rammed his sore knuckles across the other vampire’s jaw.




This part had me LOL. The Angel/Angelus interactions are priceless. And it goes without saying that I'm also really liking the Angelus/Cordy scenes as well. I've finally just caught up with your new story and like everyone else I'm loving it. I'm so happy that you decided to take this challenge. Thanks for another great story Lysa.

Posted by SI_CRAZY

 

Great chapter!!!! This fic can't get any better. Oh, wait a minute, there's a way it can be more than better, it can be perfect, you just have to add a little C/Aus smut
Anyway, I'm really loving this fic and I hope you post more soon. 

Posted by RUBY

 

Great new part!!!

Loved the Angel/Angelus part where they were fighting. had me laughing so hard!!!

quote:


“Vampire wrestling?”


 



If only that was naked, covered in mud vampire wrestling!!!

Update again soon!! You're doing agreat job!!!

Ruby 

Posted by DAMNSKIPPY

 

quote:


“I’m not the problem,” Cordelia let out a surprised gasp as everyone seemed to be mad at her for trying to break up the fight. “Tweedle Dork and Tweedle Dumb over here are the ones you need to worry about.”

A snort of laughter came from Giles direction, but he quickly covered it up by removing his glasses for a vigorous cleaning.





Too funny. And I loved that Cordy could tell them apart right away and Buffy couldn't. Loved this chapter and can't wait for more, more, more!!

Posted by CALIFI

 

Wow! You have such a gift with expression! You actually feel like your sitting there [with the popcorn and a coke,LOL!] in the same room/place as them!

Brilliant! 

Posted by LUCKYLYN

 

Post more soon. This is great. Love the fact that Angel's still attracted to Cordy even without the demon. I'm hoping for some good C/Aus smut next time around.

 


Posted by LIZZY

 

Oh, yeah. This is some good stuff. The Angel/Angelus squabble was hilarious. Good job in having Cordy handle the mom duties.

 


Posted by CORDELIA'S DESTINY

 

             Tsk, tsk. Angel doesnt' know a good thing when she straddles him and goes back to the buffster anyway. I hope he comes to his senses soon!

Great job writing this; I'm anxious for the next part. And I second the c/aus action in the next part. better be there, or else!!! 

Posted by IMPRESS

 

better and better. you're doing a great job telling this story and keeping the characters in character. oh, and count me in as one of those awaiting the c/aus smut. 

Posted by KIMMERS

 

Love this love the Cordy Angelus parts and the cordy angel parts wonder how your going to work this in the end can't weait to see
from Kimmers

 


Posted by PSYCHOFILLY

 

Wow, Looks like things are heating up btwn Angelus and Cordy, we get hints of possible A/C/A action (kinky- Would Angel do himself, inquiring minds want to know?). All done with no Buffy bashing. That's great!

 


Posted by KELLY22

 

Just getting caught up on this fic and you officially have me hooked. You are building some serious heat here missy, and I can't wait until all this sexual tension comes to a climax (literally and figuratively)!

Seriously, you need to post more NOW

 


Posted by IZZYCHASE

 

I am addicted to this fic as well, gurl! Good job with the Angel/Angelus squabbles and I loved how you kept everyone in character and there was no buffy bashing... as of yet. Thanks for another awesome fic and post more soon!

I'd love to see Angelus going for Cordelia.. w/ flowers, candy, sweet talk, the works. Great job, Lysa!

I'll also be on the cheerleading squad for those of us wanting C/Aus soon!

Look forward to reading the next installment.

 


Posted by TIPDIP

 

Great job, Lysa!

I like it that both Angel and Angelus are attracted to Cordy!

Can hardly wait for the next chapters!

Cammy

 


Posted by LYSA

 

Thanks for all of the feedback. I'm a little relieved that some of the humor wasn't a big bust. I think writing something with humor in it takes a lot more effort than writing smut. At least for me. So thanks for laughing in the right spots.

As for those of you hoping to have lots of C/Aus smut in the next part...Yikes! Angelus has a lot of courting and coaxing to do before the steam starts pouring off of your computer. I'll see what I can do.
Hoping to post today or tomorrow.

Just a brief response to Psychofilly's question:

quote:


We get hints of possible A/C/A action (kinky- Would Angel do himself, inquiring minds want to know?).




A/C/A action? Stop putting these evil little seeds in my brain. They tend to take root and grow. I would never have thought that one up on my own.

Would Angel do himself? Kinky question! I'm certain Angel had plenty of opportunity to do himself in the past. Oh...you mean with Angelus! I'm afraid Angel is the only one who can answer that...and his brain is just a bit confused at the moment. We'll have to wait to find out.

__________________
~Lysa~

 


Posted by GILLY

 

Loving this fic- can't wait to see if (how-tee hee)you incorperate A/A/C action. Keep up the good work.

Posted by IMPRESS

 

*claps excitedly* you updated. This is sooo good. I can't even say which part I liked best. It was all so well done. But is it wrong of me to have hoped Angel wouldn't give his permission and then have to punish them both? 

Posted by TIPDIP

 

Nice job, Lysa!

I can hardly wait for some C/Aus action.

Post soon!

Cammy 

Posted by TACTLESS BRUNETTE

 

Your stories are sooo GOOD!!! 

Posted by DAMNSKIPPY

 

             Whoo, baby, that Angelus is one smooth talker. I can't believe Angel is agreeing to this. I hope he doesn't regret it!

Great chapter! Need the rest soon!!!

Posted by JENBUG13

 

Yay!! A new part. This story is great. Can't wait for more, soon please.

 


Posted by ATHLANTIS

 

yeah!!!, you updated it!!!, this is so cool!!!!, Angelus!!!!! I so love him, and Angelusand Cordy is the best shipper ever!!!!!
thank u for writting this, can't wait to read more!!! 

Posted by KATRINA

 

Aww Angelus can be such a sweetie, love it. Can't wait for what is surely coming next 

Posted by LIZZY

 

Good golly, this story is amazing! The Cordy/Angel convo about Angelus was ... tense. I kept expecting something to happen. And that Angelus made me squeal with glee when he saved Cordy and tattled to Angel about the rapists. I love Angel and I love Angelus. Thank you, thank you, thank you, Lysa!

 


Posted by SI_CRAZY

 

Great chapters!!!!! This fic just gets better and better. Hope you post the next part soon, and I'm looking forward to read some C/Aus smut. 

Posted by PSYCHOFILLY

 

A new Chapter! 

Posted by CALIFI

 

OOO! Now Angel's jealousy is surging forward! So surprised he actually consented [and would have loved to hear what 'punishment' her had in mind! LOL!]

And his thought about Buffy's dominance! That's understandable that she's like that- with so much power, it seems about right she'd be like that! But, Angel being a Vamp who likes to dominate too...can see why he'd be getting a little irked about that!

I have to say, Lysa, that it was way too short!- even if it was ten pages long!

I just know from experience, that when Aus/C get steamy, my toes are gonna curl- and why do I think it wont be long before Angel goes for a taste too?!

Loving it! Post soon [cos you know how irrationally impatient and demanding we are here! *g*] 

Posted by LUCKYLYN

 

The way you write the characters is perfect. I'm holding out hope for some A/C/Aus fun. Post more soon. This fic is fantastic. 

Posted by GABRIELLA

 

Okay, Angelus is DAMN hot, but is it wrong that I want Angel to get the girl? It's the ol' romantic comedy lover in me. The nice one who the girl doesn't initially fall for (cos we fall for cruel men ) ends up with her in the end...

I'm just gonna go now and leave you to write your own story... *g* 

Posted by CALLYSTO

 

Wow Lysa,

It's been awhile since I've been on but it's nice to see you kept up with the writing

Great story so far...you have me thoroughly intrigued and anxiously waiting for more. Love your Angelus by the way...he'so...WOW. 

Posted by QUEENC

 

This is a great story so far! I love the way you are writing Angel and Angelus. Although, I must say that I'm a little torn about the whole Cordy/Angelus thing... I hope we see some indication that Angelus is really falling for Cordy and not just wanting her for sex. (Or maybe we'll see that from Angel? )

Either way, please post more soon!

Lori 

Posted by SARAH S

 

That's really one great story you wrote there!
Can't wait until the next part is ready! 

Posted by DANNYBLUE

 

This story is really good. I love your characterizations of both Angel and Angelus. We all knew Angelus could be a charmer if he wanted to. We also knew Angel wouldn't be all sweetness and light just because his demon (well, most of it) was gone. He's still as alpha male as ever.

I'm getting a kick out of Oblivious!Cordy when it comes to the souled vamp. Looks like we're in for some Jealous!Angel, too. Yipeeee!

Great fic. Looking forward to the next part. 

Posted by RUBY

 

             All I can say is wow and how much I love this fic,

please update soon!

Posted by SUNSCORCHED

 

This is coming along swimmingly Lysa, it just keeps getting better and better with each part you post. The C/Aus is hotting up very nicely, giving a good lead into their love affair. You pulled that off excellently.

I can't wait until the next part, the conversation between C/Aus following what Angel told her about him asking for permission to sleep with her. That promises to be fun to read and I hope it was fun for you to write.

I would have liked to have seen the conversation between Angel and Angelus though, could have been a lot fun... And not in that way!! For some reason I don't find an A/Aus pairing all that delicious... Oh who am I kidding??? Twin Angels, you certainly wouldn't need a mirror would you?!! 

Posted by CALIFI

 

quote:


Originally posted by Sunscorched
Twin Angels, you certainly wouldn't need a mirror would you?!!


 



Mmmmmm....imagine being sandwiched between those two...*dwibble* 

Posted by LYSA

 

Warning: Bad Poetry Ahead

Do you have any idea what you've done today Sunscorched & Califi?
Distracted me all day long while I'm trying to write part 8.

Now you have me composing silly smutty poetry all because of the following:

Sunscorched:

quote:


Twin Angels, you certainly wouldn't need a mirror would you?!!



and
Califi:

quote:


Mmmmmm....imagine being sandwiched between those two



and even
Psychofilly:

quote:


Would Angel do himself?




So here is what you have driven my crazed mind into thinking...

From Angelus' POV:

Mirror, mirror on the wall,
The vamp reflected isn't me at all.
One pure evil, One striving to be good;
I'm sure I sport much larger wood.
His clothes are lame, the colors flat;
I'm sure my hair doesn't look like that.
Gotta admit, the guy's still hot;
Would I do me? Surely not.


Hey, I never claimed to be a poet. Now that that is out of my head, I'm going back to writing part 8. As for who's doing whom...heh heh! You'll have to wait and see, but I do promise that your long awaited C/Aus smut is directly ahead. And it won't come in the form of bad poetry.

 

__________________
~Lysa~ 

Posted by CALIFI

 

quote:


Originally posted by Lysa
I'm sure I sport much larger wood.




ROTFLOL! That's what I like to hear!!!! *wanders off into a very smutty nightdream....*

 


Posted by AMBROSIA

 

This is one of my most favourite fics around. Please post more as soon as possible.

 


Posted by SUNSCORCHED

 

ROTFLMAO

Tooooo funny!! Brilliant! Fantastic! Hilarious and Spot On!

No words can be formed apart from those right now but I will quote my favourite line...

quote:


Would I do me? Surely not

 


Posted by CALIFI

 

Do I have to start stalking your ass???

It won't be pretty ya know, L!!! Grrrrrr 

Posted by NAIRI

 

Amazing fic Lysa, loved it. Please post more soon.
Nairi

 


Posted by IZZYCHASE

 

Loving your fic!

 

I'm totally loving this fic, gurl! You write both Angelus and Angel well. I haven't made up my mind as to which camp to join, but the idea of Aus/C/A is starting to get to me.

I hope we get to see some Jealous!Angel soon and some steamy C/Aus.

Keep Up the Good Work, Lysa! 

Posted by CALIFI

 

OOOO! You did that on purpose!

Angel is such a-a...I can't think of an appropriate word there! Part of me is disappointed that he'd handed her over- and another part can't wait to see what Angelus is made of! [making notes here! LOL!]

And Angel's reaction when he smells her arousal[and other things!] on his bed??!!!!

That has just got to cause a raging bit of angst!!!


Can't wait- Love you for posting, hate you with a vengeance for stopping there!!!!! Grrr! 

Posted by TRILLIAN

 

Agh! Angel's gonna go schiz! I loved it! 

Posted by LUCKYLYN

 

I can't believe you stopped there. That was so cruel. I can't wait for the next part. 

Posted by DAMNSKIPPY

 

             Ooo, Lysa, that was good! I second Cali's opinion about Angel giving her over and love it that they're doing it on his bed. Can't wait for the consequences.

Thanks for the tour, too. I always wanted to see more of the mansion.

Post very, very soon!!! 

Posted by SUNSCORCHED

 

Posted by Sunscorched on 07-30-2003 11:40 AM:

quote:


Cordelia shrugged, “Duh! He caught me by surprise. Angel has never even attempted to kiss me before, not with Miss Slays-a-Lot around. Now he does it? Guys aren’t supposed to lock lips with their brother’s girlfriend.”




This is one of my favourite lines in this, it's funny and you could imagine the look on Aus's face at Angel being referred to as his brother!

quote:


Opening her eyes as she felt the cool air rush in between them, Cordelia gazed in heavy-lidded confusion at Angelus as he set them apart. “Why?”




Heehee, that's what I wanna know!!

ANGEL'S BED! I've said that to you so many times today, hell an email was dedicated to this! I Love You for this, it's funny and good and you simply deserve a medal of honor...

Good game that *mind wanders off*

 


Posted by NAIRI

Lysa that was amazing. loved the tour don´t know how i feel about Angel handing Cordy over but can´t wait to read what he will do when he gets back and finds out what has been going on in his room.
Please post more soon b/c the wait is going to kill me.
Nairi

 


Posted by JENBUG13

 

That was just too mean leaving off right there. More soon please.

 


Posted by IMPRESS

 

You. Are. EVIL.

Mind you I mean that in a good way. Now I expect 9 to be posted VERY SOON. *Pulls out whip* or else.

Oh yeah, great chapter. 

Posted by LIZZY

 

You can't just stop there! Nooooo! I hope the next chapter has Angel returning to his room. How long will I have to wait?

 


Posted by RUBY

 

quote:


Was she implying that he was a cradle-snatching demon?




If the shoe fits.... lol.

I think Angel is going to be pissed off when he gets home and smells what has been going down in his room. Any chance that Angel might get home a bit too soon and catch them in the act on his bed and maybe join the party? Or maybe Buffy coming around to see her boyfriend, walking into his room and catching who she believes is her boyfriend with Cordy?

I am so in love with this story,

Please update soon!


Ruby

 


Posted by CALLYSTO

 

Delicious chapter Lysa although I must say I'm a little....errrr......frustrated eith where you left it.

__________________
-Callie

Posted by KATRINA

 

Oooh I loved this chapter, funny, sexy, sweet; it had it all. I am really liking your Angelus, mm such a hottie. Can't wait for the next bit, my jaw dropped when I got to the end and realised where you had left us.

 


Posted by CALIFI

 

quote:


Originally posted by ~Ruby~
Or maybe Buffy coming around to see her boyfriend, walking into his room and catching who she believes is her boyfriend with Cordy?


 



Oh my God! When I read this, Ruby, I screamed with laughter!!!

Can you imagine?! Lysa is gonna die when she reads that!!!ROTFLOL! 

Posted by LYSA

 

quote:


I think Angel is going to be pissed off when he gets home and smells what has been going down in his room. Any chance that Angel might get home a bit too soon and catch them in the act on his bed and maybe join the party? Or maybe Buffy coming around to see her boyfriend, walking into his room and catching who she believes is her boyfriend with Cordy?




Rubykins!

Glad to see that you're getting getting in the game. My somewhat evil Angelicious game that is. In response to your comments & questions:

1) Angel pissed off....you betcha!
2) Angel joining the party....just wait & read
3) Buffy coming around....I have to take a quote from Califi on this one...Mwhahaha!...I'm not telling you that either, except that it's both yes and no.

Everyone,
Thanks for all of the feedback. I'm really, really sorry to have left you hanging by a thread. The "tour" was over, so I figured you guys didn't need to read the C/Aus smut that follows. Maybe we should just skip that part...???

__________________
~Lysa~

 


Posted by IMPRESS

 

quote:


Originally posted by Lysa

Everyone,
Thanks for all of the feedback. I'm really, really sorry to have left you hanging by a thread. The "tour" was over, so I figured you guys didn't need to read the C/Aus smut that follows. Maybe we should just skip that part...???


 



HAHAHAHAHAHAH ROFLMAO! That was funny. 

Posted by IZZYCHASE

 

Lysa, you are on fire! :)

*wipes steam from monitor*

Whew, that was one amazing chapter, gurl! I loved the tour of the mansion and how Angelus is his arrogant self but really gentle with Cordy at the same time.

Keep posting! *way evil grin* I would love to see Angel's reaction to his evil twin and Cordy doing it in his bed.

Izzy.

 


Posted by SI_CRAZY

 

Amazing chapter!!!!! You're doing a great job, Lysa!!! Hope you post the next part soon, 'cause I can't wait to see how will be Angel's reaction. 

Posted by RUBY

 

Originally posted by Lysa



Rubykins!

Glad to see that you're getting getting in the game. My somewhat evil Angelicious game that is. In response to your comments & questions:

1) Angel pissed off....you betcha!
2) Angel joining the party....just wait & read
3) Buffy coming around....I have to take a quote from Califi on this one...Mwhahaha!...I'm not telling you that either, except that it's both yes and no.


 



You are just plain evil and really mean.

Can't wait to read the next part!

You better hurry up and update!

I am going to be patiently waiting....

~Ruby~

Posted by NC2224

 

I can't decide who I like more...

I love the way you write both Angel and Angelus. And their individual interactions with Cordy are great. Which is why for the first half of the story, I'm in the C/Aus camp and then you have Cordy and Angel go off to talk, and it's so obvious that Angel has some feelings for her too. Then I'm in the C/A camp. Oh, just write a threesome and have Cordy double her pleasure. Good. Problem solved.

 


Posted by CALIFI

 

This bit hits me ever time I read this, Lysa!


"He[Angel] felt like he needed to sit down in a dark room and figure out why the hell he was being such an ass. Except that Angel knew if he stopped to brood about this, he would only find himself fantasizing about Cordelia again."


Boffing Buff, yet fantasizing about Cordy- if I was Buffy, I'd be completely devastated!!! I know men do it all the time, but the way you've written it makes me think that something is seriously wrong with his relationship with Buffy...which is what you are going with!-? I never know for sure, with you lot, as things can change and twist dramatically in a part, then I'm left wondering "what's going on in that mind of his?" - or what's going on in the mind of the writer!!!!


I loved beoing sucked into fics like this! Escalates the enjoyment!

Posted by GILLY

 

Oo oh I've been waiting for this, thankyou, thankyou- off to read it now.

gilly

Posted by SUNSCORCHED

 

You already know my feelings on certain parts of this fic! I'll try my best to refrain from squealing that anymore!

My favourite part of this little slice ismost definitely ANGEL'S BED!!! Oh God woman, okay so I have no restraint, but that is a classic! You deserve a medal!

I got caught up in re-reading this part while writing this reply so I'll leave it with a plea...

You need to hurry with part 9! I'm begging you! Please, please, please put me outta my misery!

ANGEL'S BED!!! Teeheehee!! Don't those two words just bring all kindsa thing to your imagination???  

Posted by GILLY

 

Lys- how could you leave it there??? It's great can't wait for the next part. 

Posted by CALIFI

 

I bring my dismay to here too! -I still think you did i on purpose!!

And I still think Angel's a rude word- buy him a clue!!


How long do we have to wati b/f we find out His reaction to scenting her allll over his sheets???

And when do we get to see just how good Angelus is??? Hmmm?

You are so getting stalked!!! 

Posted by TIPDIP

 

I'm waiting for Angel's reaction when he smells their scent...

Eeewww...did I just say that?


Posted by ZANITA

 

Okay, I'm doubling, tripling, quadrupling this:

You did not just stop there!

I'm just now catching up on my reading and with Scorch posting this I'm hooked! 

Posted by CALIFI

 

QUOTE (tipdip @ Jul 30 2003, 11:46 AM)

I'm waiting for Angel's reaction when he smells their scent...

Eeewww...did I just say that?


C


the scary, disturbing thing is, I'm finding myself using sentences like 'smells her arousal' and what you've just said-- in a FEEDBACK!

I am seriously getting perverted and warped to a point where I think it's normal to say things like that!

I bet when visitors come here, they shudder and blink in shock at our debauchery! Hehe!

PS: Lysa is in hiding!!!!! Poor gal is getting so much stalkerage, I should feel guilty!! Muwahahahahahahahahahahaha...... 

Posted by LYSA

 

QUOTE

I am seriously getting perverted and warped to a point where I think it's normal to say things like that!



Normality is simply a state of mind.

It's made up of the collective ties that bind us.

Therefore, being a bit perverted or warped is perfectly
"normal" around this place.

And if visitors come here to gape at our debauchery then lucky for them. They probably need a taste of normal now and then.

Posted by TIPDIP

 

Oh wow, Lysa..

That was f*cking smut-o-rama hot!

*fans self*

I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Cammy

Posted by CALIFI

 

Well, I've just wibbled and jibbered to DEATH in FB at ST! I was checking summat out when you posted....and GOD!!

Love is too weak a word!! Lately, I'm feeling a lot of that word for a good few brilliant writers, and I'm mentally shattered!

, Now I'm sure that's Cordy in the middle of This smilie!!!!


I bow down in worship!!!!

- and still am begging for more!!! Angel is at the end of his tether, Girl! You EVIL woman, you!! Cos now she's said the L word, she HAS to fend off future advances, doesnt she???

So, that leaves only ONE answer....... ?! 

Posted by HELEN

 

Yay Yay, finally caught up, totally amazed and hot, hot burning stuff!

Keep it up the good stuff now (or did I mean someone else?)

Hugs, Helen 

Posted by SUNSCORCHED

 

Isn't this a welcome surprise?! I've been on a little day trip and I come home to some LysaSmut, some wonderful LysaSmut that is! If this makes no sense it's because I'm on antibiotics and I'm a little dizzy.


QUOTE

She was standing on the second step, so that put them eye to eye. “I wasn’t going to give you the graphic details. Just saying that it happened after I—”



He might not want details, but I do!

I thouroughly enjoyed Angel giving Cordy her clothes and undies, it's such an embarrassing thing to happen but you handled it perfectly. Having her practically accuse Angel of stealing her panties was so very good, I could so imagine her doing that!

The conversation between Buffy/Cordy was excellent and a makes me think of two little, old ladies in the hair salon gossiping!

In fact, there are so many things about this part that I wanna compliment you on so I'm gonna mail you with it!! I love how you're doing this, it's so damned good it's addictive. 

Posted by GILLY

 

This is fantastic it just gets better and better. Please keep it 'coming'!!

Posted by Katrina

 

             I read this and fed back at ST, but just gotta do it again, there can never be too much happy feed back.

Love the way you are handling this story line. The characters are so perfectly spot on. Even Buffy with her need for control, so true to life. Can't wait for more. 

Posted by SI_CRAZY

 

Amazing chapter!!! This fic rocks!!!! I'm looking forward to read more. 

Posted by CALLYSTO

 

YaY.

New Chapter.

I was really waitng for this one and you didn't disapoint.

Wonderful as always.

Loved the interactions between Buffy and Cordy.

__________________
-Callie

Posted by CALIFI

 

*jibber* Just give me a minute!
If I started quoting you, I'd end up repasting the whole lot! Loved the C/A interaction- and him getting cought jacking off because of Cordy ROTFLOL! by Buffy!! God that had my mouth hanging open in stunned laughter!

If only she knew!!

And the C/Aus...*sigh* and *wibble* LOVE! WoW!!!

Woman, you ROCK!!

Totally worth the wait [NOW I can say that! *g*]

- But still want more of this amazing fic!! -Soon! (-; 

Posted by LIZZY

 

So freakin' hot.

Posted by IMPRESS

 

That was...*fans self* hot. More. Now. 

Posted by KIMMERS

 

reading this is as hard as writing my new fic things are getting really heated and poor angel
from Kimmers

 


Posted by HELEN

 

WHAT are you tryin' to do to me; blushing much? Lucky I get into work early and no can see me.

HOT STUFF!!

Posted by KATRINA

 

This was, as usual, incredible. So very very hot, passionate and loving. Mm vanilla sex, can't wait for some of Angelus' more hmm naughty ideas to come into play. 

Posted by LUCKYLYN

 

Wow, I absolutely love this fic. Loved the C/A talk. Loved Angel calling her Sweetheart. And of course I loved C/Aus together. Post more soon. 

Posted by NAIRI

 

WOW!
That was hot, i am so glad i decided to wait and read this chapter at home instead of work. As always amazing writing Lysa and i can hardly wait to read the next part
Nairi

 


Posted by JENBUG13

 

Wow!! That was great! More soon please

Posted by RUBY

 

That was just hot!

I loved every bit of it!

Please update soon!

Ruby

 


Posted by SI_CRAZY

 

Great fic!!! This chapter was HOT!!!! I loved the C/A little talk... Hope you post more soon. 

Posted by SUNSCORCHED

 

Sorry for the late feedback, alcohol can do funny things to a person!!

Loved Angel's confrontation with Cordelia

quote:


Letting out a dark laugh, Angel brought his other arm up to the top of the refrigerator and completely blocked Cordelia into the open prison of his arms. She immediately thought of the fact that Angelus had made the same move, their habits in some ways so similar to each other.




This part is particularly good because you have Cordelia realising the similarities between Angel and Angelus. The conversation between Buffy-Cordy was excellent, I can imagine the two of them giggling and gossiping about both vamps. Almost feel sorry for the Tweedle Twins!!!

Part 10 is needed in a hurry that's for sure, can't wait for more and I'm getting pretty desperate.

You're doing beyond brilliantly with this Lysa.

 

 

Posted by TIPDIP

 

QUOTE (Lysa @ Aug 10 2003, 08:41 PM)



Now plucking at a fold in the sheet, Buffy asked, “Angel? What were you thinking about when I came in?”

Angel knew Buffy meant the moment when she caught him easing his arousal after being so wound up by Cordelia’s intimate scent in his territory and on his possessions. That had a studied ring to it and sounded much better to the vampire than being caught red-handed jacking off because he was fantasizing about Cordelia Chase. After an awkward pause, he answered, “The things that have gone on in this bed.”


Hehe! Smooth move, Angel!

Hurray..it's up! I really love this fic. And I could get used to seeing double as well...if it were Angel and Angelus!

I like the way Cordy took on the whole Scooby gang while she was defending Angelus. They couldn't even touch her. She was bitchy Queen C at her best. LOL

I kind've felt bad for Buffy when she kissed Angelus by accident and he made her look like a fool afterwards, however, I really enjoyed how jealous Angel got after witnessing Cordy and Angelus kiss in the library.

Nice job, Lysa!

More soon, please?

Cammy

Posted by HELEN

 

              I already posted at ST - but no reason not to here too

Loved it, snickerworthy in too many ways to count. Next part please

Helen 

Posted by CALIFI

 

QUOTE:

Angel had himself convinced that these random possessive thoughts and feelings about Cordelia were all temporary. Just some vampire instinct that had surfaced. Once he got used to the idea, Angel felt certain things would get back to normal again.

Who's he kidding?

The jury was still out on that idea, but Angel decided that Cordelia Chase might still be a candidate for that spanking he had envisioned earlier.

Can't wait for that! *dwibble*

“If you want Cordelia here, keep her out of my bed and then there won’t be a reason to fight.”

“Yeah, Bro. I’ll keep her out of your bed. Just remember that even when she was there…Cordelia was with me.”

His hold on the ceramic mug was so tight that Angel heard it crack. “If you can keep it, Angel, you can have Cordelia’s friendship, but the rest is all mine.”


Angel is just dying with jealousy here! UH-OH!!!!

“What the fuck was that?” Angelus demanded as he towered over her with a look of pure disgust on his face. Wiping his mouth with the back of his hand, the vampire queried with a harsh tone, “Can’t you tell us apart, Slayer?”

Somewhere in the back of his mind, Angel was asking himself why it was Buffy couldn’t tell them apart when Cordelia found it so easy.


Poor Buffy [I should say that, really *G*] And Angel's starting to question his relationship more! Oh dear!

Sighing as their lips parted, Cordelia murmured to her vampire, “You can dilly with my dally anytime for a kiss like that.”

loved that line!! lol!


Already angry, the sight of Angelus and Cordelia kissing had brought a swift flare of jealousy. The fact that he recognized it as such was enough to floor him. He would have to get used to the sight of those two kissing. If that was all he was going to be subjected to at the mansion, Angel figured he’d be lucky.

“You’re coming with me,” Angel informed Cordelia determinedly, glaring down at her with dark pools that held her rapt attention and caused her to quake in sudden fear. This was not a request, she realized breathlessly.


Is our Sexy, Soulde Vamp losing control?????

Reaching out for her hand, Angel circled his thumb over the soft skin on her inner wrist. “I’m sorry, sweetheart.”


Angel released Cordelia’s wrist telling himself that he needed to fight these impulses that compelled him to touch her. Especially now that he had no right to do so.


Yup! Angel is heading down that path...Starts off small...!

" you’re setting all this up to include me in your version of some happy little vampire family!

And Buffy's calling is crying out in protest! Not long now b/f the bomb explodes! She keeps making Vamp remarks all the way through, whilst referring to Angelus- Angel can't help but pick up on it eventualy! -After all! He's a Vamp too..... God this is great! I worship at your feet, Lysa!

Which leave me with one last question....

How long b/f the rest???????  

Posted by GILLY

 

This just gets better & better, Buffy seems to be getting left behind, will Cordy be able to take both A's? Can't wait for more.

Posted by SUNSCORCHED

 

QUOTE

Angel knew Buffy meant the moment when she caught him easing his arousal after being so wound up by Cordelia’s intimate scent in his territory and on his possessions. That had a studied ring to it and sounded much better to the vampire than being caught red-handed jacking off because he was fantasizing about Cordelia Chase. After an awkward pause, he answered, “The things that have gone on in this bed.”



I almost feel sorry for Buffy here, it would be awful to know your bloke was dillying with his dally while thinking of another girl. But lets face it, with Cordy as the other woman who can blame him?!


QUOTE

“If you can keep it, Angel, you can have Cordelia’s friendship, but the rest is all mine.”



Anybody else feel like saying Nyah Nyah Nyah?? It's Angel's own fault, he shoulda opened his eyes.


QUOTE

Several, thought Xander rather reluctantly. Hearing Cordelia use his full name that way suggested that if he wanted his ass to remain intact he better back off. There was a look of brilliant defiance in Cordelia’s hazel eyes and her flushed skin glowed with the color of her fury, but Xander had to admit that Cordelia had always looked beautiful when it came to defending the guy she loved.

He missed that.



Are we gonna get Jealous Xander? Cus that would be so cool!


QUOTE

She stalked up to the vampire who wasn’t causing her Slayer senses to tingle and thrust herself into his arms. His hands automatically came around her waist and Buffy wrapped her arms around his shoulders pulling his head down into an energetic and enthusiastic kiss. It lasted only seconds as Buffy felt herself hurled to the floor.

“What the fuck was that?” Angelus demanded as he towered over her with a look of pure disgust on his face. Wiping his mouth with the back of his hand, the vampire queried with a harsh tone, “Can’t you tell us apart, Slayer?”



I giggled at Buffy here, actually giggled out loud! There's one thing to get the wrong vamp but it's entirely another to be shown, in front of your friends, that the vamp in question didn't like your kisses!!! Heehee!


QUOTE

Sighing as their lips parted, Cordelia murmured to her vampire, “You can dilly with my dally anytime for a kiss like that.”



LMAO!!! Yet another brilliantly classic line you've come out with here! Brilliant, superbly brilliant!

This whole part is one of the best you've written for this challenge, I enjoyed it so much. It made me laugh, cringe in embarrassment for Buffy and if possible, made me love the Bad Boy just that little bit more! You brought Queen C in with sparks and I just simply love you for this.

P.S. A suggestion for the spice she's going to use: Tobasco Sauce and lots of it!!!

Posted by CALIFI

 

QUOTE (Sunscorched @ Aug 11 2003, 09:33 PM)

QUOTE

P.S. A suggestion for the spice she's going to use: Tobasco Sauce and lots of it!!!

You evil EVIL woman! 

....would be a lugh though! 

Posted by LYSA

 

You guys are terrific! It's a good thing feedback has no calories, because I just eat it up!!! Especially when your comments have me ROTFLOL!

Thanks to Judi & Sach for their helpful feedback to the "previews" I sent them.

As for the tobasco sauce...STOP READING MY MIND! Sheesh! Is there NO privacy around this forum? First Cali has Cammy's shower bugged and now Scorchy is mind reading.

SunScorched, now see if I give you that W.C. scene you've been desperately waiting for (and no, Cali, it doesn't stand for Water Closet!).

Gotta go! I have a little dilly dallying to accomplish in Part 11. 

Posted by KATRINA

This is so great. I love how Cordy is able to so easily tell the difference between the two and Buffy can't (sorry I know it's petty but I can't help myself). Love the vision of two such gorgeous man-pires at breakfast, mm where can I get me some?

Hoping for more soon. 

Posted by SI_CRAZY

 

Amazing chapter!!! I'm really loving this fic!!!! I can't wait to read more, so please, post again soon. 

Posted by CORDELIA'S DESTINY

 

Re: Double or Nothing / Part 10 (08/10/03)

quote:


Originally posted by Lysa
Sighing as their lips parted, Cordelia murmured to her vampire, “You can dilly with my dally anytime for a kiss like that.”




*sigh* There are so many amazing things about this story, I don't know where to start. I loved the above quote. Made me laugh.

I also liked how you brought in Cordy's experimentation with their blood. And the fact that Angel called her "sweetheart." *sigh* so good!!

Write more soon, please!! Like, yesterday!! 

Posted by ISLANDGIRL_CHE

 

Luved it,keep it coming.....

 


Posted by HELEN

 

Oops poor Buffy (blushing for her) and loved the bit about Buffy and Cordy tolerating one another and double dating (can't you just see it!) and Cordy not minding but Buffy does. Hmm issues?

Lovin' it, more soon please

Hugs, Helen

Posted by KATRINA

 

That was great, loved every bit. Defensive Cordy was on a roll with the 'you people suck' line, very funny, and mmm dilly dallying, count me in any day

Great part as usual, I am really enjoying this story. Well done Lysa, hoping for more soon.

 


Posted by CALIFI

 

I've gone into more detail [and gushing! ] over AO- but there can never be enough praise!!!

Love this story sooo much, and seriously can't wait for more!- yeah, I know; you have to write it first! lol!- but just so you know, I'm dying for more ASAP!

Here's me! -

Posted by TIPDIP

 

Hi again, Lysa!


You've seen my comments earlier (I hope..)

Just want to tell ya again how much I'm loving this story!

Please post the next chapter soon!

*hugs*



Cammy 

Posted by LUCKYLYN

 

Lysa you rock. I love how you've written the characters. I truly can't wait for more of this fic.

 


Posted by DAMNSKIPPY

 

quote:


“I can hear you!” Cordelia pressed the buttons on the microwave and then turned around to face the vampires. Crossing her arms on the kitchen island, she leaned toward them as they gazed back at her with their identical faces. It brought a wide smile to her face as she thought, I could get used to seeing double everyday.




How could they both not love her?

Great chapter and this story keeps getting better. Can't wait for your next post!!

Posted by NAIRI

 

Amazing chapter Lysa, i loved it. Can´t wait to read more, please post again soon.
Nairi

 


Posted by ATHLANTIS

 

Re: Re: Double or Nothing / Part 10 (08/10/03)

quote:
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Originally posted by Lysa
Sighing as their lips parted, Cordelia murmured to her vampire, “You can dilly with my dally anytime for a kiss like that.”
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------


I don't know what that means, sniff, sniff!

You updated, yeah!!! cool chapter!!!, I hate Buffy!!!!, Cordy and Angelus relantionship is awesome!!!, can't wait to read more

 


Posted by IMPRESS

 

This keeps getting better and better. I get so excited to see a new post thinking it's going to be great and it is. More soon.

 


Posted by LIZZY

 

Great part. I love Torn!Angel. And that last scene with both of them with Cordy... priceless. More soon!

Posted by SUNSCORCHED

 

You already have my reply over at AO but as somebody else already said there can never be too much praise for this fic!!

I loved this chapter, there were a few parts in this where I almost felt sorry for Buffy!

quote:


Angel knew Buffy meant the moment when she caught him easing his arousal after being so wound up by Cordelia’s intimate scent in his territory and on his possessions. That had a studied ring to it and sounded much better to the vampire than being caught red-handed jacking off because he was fantasizing about Cordelia Chase. After an awkward pause, he answered, “The things that have gone on in this bed.”




It would be horrid knowing that your guy was dillying with his dally while thinking naughty thoughts about another woman. Bad Angel, bad!

The tension between Angelus and Angel was excellent, would quote you here but the whole conversation would be repeated.

quote:


Sending Giles an annoyed look, Cordy pointed out, “Look, I don’t think you’re qualified to lecture anyone about changing spots…Ripper.”




This whole part was brilliant, you brought the Queen out perfectly giving us the Cordy we all know and love. Loved the way she stood up for her vampire to the others, in fact I loved this entire chapter!

quote:


Sighing as their lips parted, Cordelia murmured to her vampire, “You can dilly with my dally anytime for a kiss like that.”


 



Classically brilliant line, you do know just how amazing you are right? No??

Well, you are amazing simply amazingly brilliant and I love the way your mind works so keep it up because you've left me (and others) desperately wanting part 11!!!

I said this over at AO but there's no harm in repeating it, I think she should use lots of Tabasco sauce for spicing up the blood!!! 

Posted by Ruby

 

Great part!!!

Hurry up with the next update!!!

DAMNSKIPPY:

 

Mmmmmm, Angelus. *sigh* Wonderful chapters. Glad to see Buffy and Cordy calling a truce.

Loved Angel choking on the spiced blood and Angelus pretending it was sooo tasty. Oh! And sucking on her ice cream finger. OMG!!


What can I say about Angelus sex? Yummy doesn't quite cover it. But, A/C/Aus sex has got to be twice the fun. We know Angel wants her bad, so don't keep him or us waiting too long!

HELEN:

 

God I loved these three sooo much, i particularly loved the Vanilla Ice cream

QUOTE

Letting out a distinct growl, Angelus left them in no doubt that he didn’t want Angel to have a taste of anything. Rolling her eyes, Cordelia suddenly comprehended the misunderstanding. “Angelus, I have a spoon.”

Snatching it out of her hand, Angelus didn’t care if she had a whole set of silverware. “Mine.


I am such a sucker for possessive guys!

There was so much I enjoyed I'd be here all night but jeeze someone give Buffy a slap (soory) talk about wound up much and Cordrelia is just absolutley fantastic - poor Angel he definately came off worse with this pairing didn't he?

More soon, no excuses - but big thanks for such a lovely long post.

Hugs, Helen 

KIMMERS:

 

Love this and can't wait for mjore please write more soon
from Kimmers

GILLY

 

This is great Lysa, you spoiled us with so much, now you know we're gonna expect it every time.

I love the way you get them all interacting, so believable. Aus/C action it theatre, so very hot!

Angel not knowing what to do at a movie, in the back row, with the one he loves..LOL..Cordy's right what a dork.

SUNSCORCHED:

 

QUOTE

Pounding Angel hard on the back, Cordelia huffed at his obvious attempt to convince her that she should lay off the experiments. “Don’t be such a weenie. It can’t be that bad.”



The image this bit gave me will last a long, long time! I can see her whacking him on the back every time he drinks her coffee or a blood concoction of hers, very funny images indeedy!


QUOTE

Buffy further explained, “Girl talk.”



The words every man dreads to hear! This gave me an image of Buffy and Cordy hidden in a room while Angel and Angelus squabble over who gets to listen in!! Ahh, the things this fic does to my warped little mind!


QUOTE

And she’d done it with a smile.



No person can resist The Smile!


QUOTE

“Yeah. For good reason, too,” Xander told her. “He’s your mortal enemy, Buffy. Not Count Chocula.”



Spot on Xander comment, yet another classic line from Lysa, you do realise I'm making a list of all these classic lines don't you?!

The whole ice cream date was incredible, it was funny, cute and the sweet vanilla kiss between C/Aus was sweetly hot! Loved the jealousy from both girls and loved the Queen C glare that followed the jealousy! Angelus doing his best to avoid Cordy's ice cream gave me yet another funny image! I could really see our fave Bad Boy getting force fed by her!

Cordy holds spoon to Angelus' mouth: "Opeeen wi-ide!"
Angelus shakes head sharply: "No. Not gonna go do it. You can't make me. I'm evil!"

Well, I thought it was funny!!!

The interractions between Cordy/Scoobies and Cordy/Giles was good, enjoyed the triplet comment from Harmony and thought the way you ended it was almost as evil as our Bad Boy!! If you can't tell, I love how you've kept that going, it's brilliantly funny and should give him an ego boost!

The movie date was wickedly hot and not OTT at all, loved Angelus' take-control attitude and loved how he keeps his shameless persona! Though I did feel kinda sorry for Angel here, having to listen to his brother get hot n heavy with the girl he's lusting after has to be head-battering. Though, I'm sure when the time comes, he's gonna make up for the teasing whole heartedly.

Excellent part Lysa and impatiently looking forward to the next installment of this flaming hot fic! I hope you're really enjoying writing this because it is truly a classic fic that is entertaining, comic, hot and cute. A general delight to read and that's exactly what we need.

Well Done, here's a cherry lollypop just for you!!

CALIFI:

 

I was just reading this again, and another part sueednely struck me that I'd missed the first time round!

"He’d never really talked to Buffy that way or she to him. Most of their conversations involved Slaying. The rest seemed to be filled with long periods of silence, but the quiet between them normally spoke volumes. Did Buffy expect to hear such words from him? Even if she did, Angel decided he wasn’t gonna try it now. Have to think about it first. Plan what to say before he actually did it. Maybe he’d make a list.

Maybe he'd make a list!! ROTFLOL!!!! I couldn't stop laughing at that!!!!!

Seriously can't wait for more,Lysa! 

KATRINA: 

 

Just wanted to add: great fic pic Cal, you are so talented. 

EDITED BY LYSA TO ADD: This was Sach's awesome original FicPic for DoN. It was a great inspiration to me.

SI_CRAZY:

 

Great chapters!!!! I thought that this fic couldn't get better, boy was I wrong!!!! This story is amazing, I love it. Hope you post more soon. 

IMPRESS:

 

Hi my name is Impress and I'm an obsessive-compulsive fan fiction addict.

And as long as wonderful fics like this are written, I will willingly remain an obsessive-compulsive fan fiction addict.

Great hun. Three absoulutly wonderful chapters. I'm going to need another fix VERY SOON. 

LUCKYLYN:

 

This was amazing. I love the way you're building the story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

 


CORDELIA'S DESTINY:

 

Yea!!! More Dbl or Nothin'!!! I just can't get enough of this story. I loved the conversation between Cordy and Buffy in the garden, and how Angel was being Mr. Voyeurism and loving it.

Also loved this quote from Cordy to Harm:

quote:



What was she hoping for? Triplets? “No. His only other relatives are out of town right now. I don’t think Spike is your type.”




Ha, ha! too funny. Nice nod to the show's actual events.

__________________
Jules

 


HELEN: 

 

I love this story sooo much - hot possessive Angelus, stunningly great Cordy and poor Buffy is so unsympathetic it's untrue.

Jeeze Angel your sure paying for not paying attention to the best girl Hee Hee

Such a lovely long post too and brilliantly written IMO

More, More NOW!!!

Hugs, Helen

 


CALIFI:

 

Boy is Angel in trouble!

Lysa: Every time I read this, I'm sucked in and feeling sorry for Burry [!], a mixture of sympathy and rolling eyes at Angel, and Angelus- how long b/f he really gets pissed with Angel? And poor Cordy, stuck in the middle!

You already know my feelings regarding this fic, but I'll say it again: Love it with a vengeance. [can't wait to find out about this 'worry' of Giles.]

SUNSCORCHED:

 

I don't know where to begin! There were so many parts in this that were so much better than good! This was funny, hot and simply wonderful to read.

quote:


Buffy further explained, “Girl talk.”




There isn't a man alive, or undead, that wouldn't fear those spoken words!

quote:


Pounding Angel hard on the back, Cordelia huffed at his obvious attempt to convince her that she should lay off the experiments. “Don’t be such a weenie. It can’t be that bad.”




This bit gave me delightful images of Angel being walloped on his back while choking on her concoctions or coffee.

quote:


“I’ve seen Angel attempt to dance. Slow is…good. Fast is…well, we won’t even go there right now. So I’m assuming that your dancing skills are of equal suckage.”
Angelus was standing apart from his double, but his defensive stance was just the same. Unwilling to admit it, the vampire merely held his tongue.


 



Our favourite Bad Boy isn't so egotistical now, is he?!

The whole ice cream date was excellent, funny and sweetly hot. Loved the part where Angelus kept trying to avoid Cordy's spoon and her attempts to get him to eat ice cream! Enjoyed the jealousy over Angel/Angelus getting eyed up by those girls, it made a nice change! Though it would be fun to see Angel/Angelus snarking over some teenage boys eyeing up Cordy/Buffy!

What can I say about the movie date? That was hot with a capital H! Poor Angel having to sit there while his brother had a hot n heavy make-out session with the girl he wants. I'm surprised the poor vamp didn't go insane!!

The steamy love scene between Cordy/Angelus was just that. Steamy, hot, sensual and it made me want my very own Bad Boy! This is so well written and you deserve a gold star!

Loved the Scooby/Cordy and Giles/Cordy interraction, it seemed pretty spot on. Yes, you really need to hurry and the next installment of this posted so very soon. Words can't describe how much I'm loving this fic. 

FRAZI:

 

Re: Double or Nothing / Parts 11, 12 & 13 [NC-17] (08/21)

quote:


Originally posted by Lysa

Judging by Angelus’ example with the flowers and candy routine, maybe a little romance was in order. He could do that. If Angelus could manage to plagiarize poets and provide Cordelia with little gifts, he could certainly do the same for Buffy.

How hard could it be?




*fans herself* Okay. I'm never going to be able to sit in a bloody theater without a stupid smile on my face anymore. Thank you :P All i can say is darlin...you spin a mean story...with or without the hot lovemakin Can't wait to see how Buffy reacts to being woed. I'm really growing with this idea of having Aus/C and A/B in the same picture. Great work.


Posted by DamnSkippy on 08-22-2003 08:46 AM:

I can't improve on what everyone else has said. The ice cream finger sucking, the Angel voyeurism, the theatre sex...just too, too hot. And I can't wait for tongue-tied, clumsy Angel to try to woo Buffy and see her reaction.

Great work and great fic! Post soon!! 

DAMNSKIPPY:

 

I can't improve on what everyone else has said. The ice cream finger sucking, the Angel voyeurism, the theatre sex...just too, too hot. And I can't wait for tongue-tied, clumsy Angel to try to woo Buffy and see her reaction.

Great work and great fic! Post soon!! 

ANNLYNNMARIE:

 

Hot. So very hot in here Damn...your fanfic gets me a little weak in the knees.

Off to sit down.... 

LYSA:

 

Thank you all so much for your wonderful feedback. Gives me an ego boost every time. I have lots more of this fic on the front burner and hope to work on it this weekend.

Oh...Frazi:

quote:


Can't wait to see how Buffy reacts to being woed. I'm really growing with this idea of having Aus/C and A/B in the same picture.





Don't get too comfy cozy of the idea of B/A (not that many on this board would). Refer to Scorchy's Challenge Item #7:

quote:


B/A starts to deteriorate despite the fact that sex is no longer an issue d/t mistrust and the slayer/vampire dynamic.


 

__________________
~Lysa~ 

NAIRI:

 

Lysa you did it again, another amazing chapter this was very hot and i suddenly feel like going to the theater i wonder why
Can´t wait to read the next part, please post again soon.
Nairi

 


KATRINA:

 

quote:


As Buffy and Angel exchanged questioning looks, both wondered exactly when everyone had agreed to the plan. Sending Angel an apologetic shrug, Buffy couldn’t help but feel that Cordelia had steamrolled all three of them.




Loved this part. From the very start with Cordy helping Angel and Angelus by fixing them breakfast to the end with Cordy and Angelus finding their own amusement at the theatre. Can't wait for more, great job Lysa. It's all so fantastic.

 


SI_CRAZY:

 

Great chapters!!! I'm so loving this fic. You're doing an amazing job, Lysa!!! Hope you post more soon. 

CALIFI:

 

This is just so F***ing brilliant, Lysa

Words can't express how much I love it! We so need a genuflecting smilie here!!!! So this will have to do

Damn! A & Aus are soooo hot! Angel's jealousy is sizzling- how long can he keep his hands to himself?- and do we want him to?- Nu-huh! *evil grin*

Buffy's reactions are a mixture of childishness and domination, who is selfish even regarding sexual pleasure...Doesn't she realise that there is a LOT of pleasure to be had by Giving AND taking?? Grow up, Buff, and find yourself a lapdog [or Dildo, as Angel so succintly put it LOL!]

As I mentioned b/f, the build up of resentment on A's part, and the barely hidden disgust at a 'Vampire's' innate sensuality, is gonna be the straw that broke the Camel's back! [and I can't wait! ]

Bravo! Bellissimo! -And more!

Calxx 

SUNSCORCHED:

 

Posted by: Sunscorched Aug 25 2003, 07:17 PM

I'm not gonna quote cos I'll be here all night!

Part 14

This part was fantastic, though I am a pure C/A and total anti B/A, I enjoy the way you have the interract with each other. You write it so it isn't yucky, tacky or intolerable and it takes a talented writer to do that. I loved Xander's cluelessness before the lightbulb flashed, the comments you used gave a wonderful depiction of his character. You nailed the Zeppo Lysa!

Buffy's thought process regarding her flowers and candy were mean and ungrateful. We have Angel who genuinely made an effort only to get it thrown into his face, or Xander's face as the case maybe! It made me think of why she didn't appreciate them and I came up with that she could be envious because Cordy got flowers from Angelus while she got dead puppies!

I can see Angel having words with Cordelia for telling Buffy about vampy stuff.


Part 15

This was brilliant, I laughed all the way through it! A football game was a great place to take Angelus and he was pretty good for most of it! The thing that stood out to me the most about this part was Willow. Though she finda him scary she still speaks to him and answers his questions.

That is a side of her character which I can only remember seeing three times. Once when she was kidnapped by the Mayor, when she was kidnapped by Spike and when Spike tried to bite her. I thought it was good the way you showed this side of her and leaning it towards Angelus.

Another bit that got me was how you brought out Buffy's sense of humour when she commented on the fact that Angel/Angelus were oggling the cheerleaders. She did have a sense of humour and enjoyed the inaterraction between A/B/Aus at this bit. The part where Angel encourages her to talk was brilliant, he knows that they only talk about slaying so maybe it was a subconscious thing for him to get her to talk about.

And trust Buffy to pick the one thing that would get Angelus demanding revenge for his sweet lady love! I love, love, love the way you're writing Angelus in this; he's funny, sensual, shameless and wickedly hot. The part where the scuffle happens made me grin hugely, my huge grin turned sappy when Cordelia showed concern for Angelus but also laughed when he growled, asking if Angel thought it tickled!


Part 16

Your B/A was HOT! Well okay, your Angel was HOT! He was forceful, commanding, dominent with side order of nice crudeness! But he was also acting like a total male! I don't blame Buffy for sticking to her guns, I wouldn't wanna get down n dirty in a place where I work either!

Maybe I would if my boss looked like DB but that's not the point here is it?!

What made me smile here was how you turned Buffy from a none-horny Slayer to a normal, horny teenage girl who can't get any cos her mum is home! Reading her like that was good and I found it enjoyable! I wonder if and when she's gonna realise Angelus has the vampy hearing too!!

Angel's fantasy was HOT HOT HOT! Your B/A may be tolerablely hot but your C/A has steam coming off of it! It was heightened by the fact that C/Aus hadn't been doing anything sexual anyway. The tension in Angel just that little bit more. You made her sleeping very sensual, adding little bits to make it very intimate.

In a way, I wanted to see Angel go into the room further just to see what Angelus would have done but then if Angel got beaten to a mass of bleeding flesh, Angelus would suffer for it and we don't want that! I felt little tingles when Aus gave A the silent warning, not a smart thing for Angel to vamp out and then go into that room, his only purpose being to claim Cordelia.

All three parts were equal in brilliance and you need a bloody medal and some chocolate cake! Keep it up honey, we need more of these fics.

SI_CRAZY:

 

Great chapters!!!! This fic just gets better and better. I loved the scene where Cordy is sleeping and Angelus is watching her, it's so sweet. I'm really liking read this story. Please, post more soon. 

KATRINA:

 

Another great installment in a wonderful story. You have such a gift and I don't know how you keep it all so consistently good. I am loving the gradual way Angel and Buffy's relationship is deteriorating, it's like people say: be careful what you wish for because you just might get it. Seems like Angel and Buffy's dreams of what could be, were just that: dreams. The reality is far from wonderful for them. Unlike Cordy and Angelus who they have constantly in front of them as an example of how things could be.

Loving this muchly and looking forward to more. 

TIPDIP:

 

Another excellent chapter, Lysa!

Poor Angel, everything he wants into a relationship isn't happening because Buffy is being a stick-in-the-mud. Girl needs to do some growing up quick or she's going to lose that luscious hunk of a man...well..if she hasn't already.

Loved the protective/possessive scene with Angelus warning Angel to stay away from Cordy, but then again, that woman would be one lucky chick if Angel entered into their relationship, *wink* *wink*...

I'm really loving this! Hope you post the next installment soon!

DAMNSKIPPY:

 

I'm so glad Sunscorched is here. She reviews so well that there's nothing I can add except to say 'what she said'! I'm in love with Angelus and you've made me tolerate B/A. Trust me, that's a freakin' miracle.

I want to fall asleep in Aus's arms. Mmmmmm....

More!!!!

HELEN:

 

WOW I printed this off in work but had to wait to reply.

This fic is abosutely superb, it hums and sizzles the whole time.

Love possessive Angel/us and Xander was hilarious.

Gotta say though I feel so sorry for Angel being stuck with Buffy but that's just the C/A'er in me

Love it, Helen 

GILLY:

 

This is great, I wonder how long before you're gonna to get them all tog A/Aus&C (u r rnt u?)! 

CELESTE:

 

I really love this story!!! You've got me wondering though who she is gonna end up with...and while I love reading Angelus and Cordy, I really hope she ends up with our ever loving souled vampire... Can't wait to read the next part!

 


TRILLIAN:

 

quote:


Originally posted by Lysa
Cordelia lay across Angelus’ lap, sleeping peacefully in the safe harbor of his arms. One hand resting on his chest, her head snuggled into the crook of his shoulder. With the exception of Cordelia’s discarded shoes and socks, both were fully dressed. Angelus was simply watching her sleep, his arms wrapped around her tiny waist and gazing down at her beautiful face, purring quietly.




I was all ready for a scene of smut, when you pulled this!I can't tell you just how much I am loving this story. I've ended a particularly crappy day with a bar of Dairy Milk and the next three parts of your fic. Stellar! 

SI_CRAZY:

 

Amazing chapters!!! Just when I thought that this fic couldn´t get any better, you go and surprises me. I'm so loving this fic, I think that maybe I'm addict to this, so please, make me happy and post more soon. 

CORDELIA'S DESTINY:

 

quote:


You've got me wondering though who she is gonna end up with...and while I love reading Angelus and Cordy, I really hope she ends up with our ever loving souled vampire...




DITTO!! Altho, I would LOVE to see Angel and Angelus merge again and have Angel pick Cordy over Buffy. . . but any A/C ending would be fantastico. I just hope its a happy ending!!

Also loved:

quote:


It should be Buffy dancing that sexy shimmy in his head, not Cordelia. He had no right to think of Cordelia getting naked for him. Certainly no right to think of all of the ways he would take her once her beautiful body was bare. So what if he’d never actually seen her unclothed body— his two hundred plus years of experience could fill in a few details for his overactive imagination.




and liked Angelus getting totally into football.

And I just wanted to say a big THANKS for writing this fic. I'm absolutely loving it and I get so excited when I see new parts posted. Keep up the good work!

 

__________________
Jules

KATRINA:

 

quote:


If they were ever to establish what seemed to come so naturally to Angelus and Cordelia, this was going to take more effort than he had ever had to drum out for a woman.




It's funny isn't it? How much work it is for Buffy and Angel to have a relationship now that they can and Cordy and Angelus just do it so naturally? When will Angel and Buffy buy a clue, they loved the star crossed lovers idea more than they actually loved each other.

I know I've said this before, but the slow deterioration in their relationship is written so incredibly well. And the love and tenderness between Cordy and Angelus is really powerful.

I also am addicted to this story and eagerly await more. Great job as always. 

IMPRESS:

 

Really, Really wonderful. I look forward to each and every chapter of this story. You're doing a great job of portraying both relationships. I can't wait for more. 

RACHELLE:

 

Ahhh... delightful 

DAMNSKIPPY:

 

quote:


Cordelia lay across Angelus’ lap, sleeping peacefully in the safe harbor of his arms. One hand resting on his chest, her head snuggled into the crook of his shoulder. With the exception of Cordelia’s discarded shoes and socks, both were fully dressed. Angelus was simply watching her sleep, his arms wrapped around her tiny waist and gazing down at her beautiful face, purring quietly.




*sniff* Ah, gee, that was beee-uuuu-tiful. And so totally unexpected. C/Aus have the best relationship.

Poor Angel. Buffy is so clueless about what her vampire wants and needs. She really is a child. Can't wait for the implosion of that relationship.

More, more!!

 


NC2224:

 

This story just keeps getting better...

I absolutely love the C/Aus interaction. Their relationship just seems to come so easy. And the ending was beautiful. But if you're taking a poll, I want Cordy to end up with Angelus. I really like Angel and all, but Angelus has been so sweet. At the very least, Angel and Angelus have to merge back into one and he has to end up with Cordy. But I know no matter what you write, it will be outstanding and I'll be reading. I can't wait for more!

 


HELEN:

 

This is absoutely fabulous Lysa

Hot, sweet, possessive, sexy wow I can go on and on, so I'll just echo everyone one else.

Hugs, Helen

NAIRI:

 

Amazing writing Lysa, this fic gets better and better with every new chapter. I love the way you write C/AUS, they really are the perfect couple and i feel so sorry for Angel his so alone eventhough he has Buffy. The ending was beautiful and i can´t wait to read the next part, please post again soon.
Nairi

LUCKYLYN:

 

The way you've put this together is amazing. I loved that C/Aus have more than sex going on between them. They way you put together all the relationships in this story is just perfect. Post more soon.

CALIFI:

PARTS 17 & 18 

I daren't start quoting, cos I'll only end up repeating the lot!

Poor Angel, Poor Angelus- and poor Cordy!! What a triangle

Loved the 'bonding' moment, and the C/A interaction in the kitchen- I really thought A was gonna get a little more physical- and having to remind himself later that he loved Buff! *snigger*

Brilliant- and I soooo need to read more *sigh* We are never satisfied, are we?

WOW! Love it. Bravo! Encore!


Calixx Mwah! 

GILLY:

 

Two more great chapters, Lysa. How could you leave it with Cordy running out into the night in next to nothing, cruel?

Loved Angelus making friends with Willow by getting her some more fish, sweet, he really is trying to integrate with the Scoobies, probably more so than Angel.

HELEN:

 

OMG I can't tell you how much I love this fic - I am so impressed with how you write both Angel and Angelus - hot, hard, lean mean loving machines

Plus Cordelia WOW, can you blame them both for wanting her - not a chance, they both have such good taste .

I love Xander too, I missed him the most when I stopped watching Buffy and your fic reminds me why.

I have absolutely no dea how you're going to resolve this - I just hope it's not gonna make me wanna cwry

can't wait for the nxt few parts!!!!

Hugs, Helen

DAMNSKIPPY:

 

QUOTE

Offended, a hurt puppy-dog expression appeared on Angel’s handsome face. Cordelia was not going to let it get to her. “Don’t give me that look, Mr. Distance. You’ve been avoiding me all morning. Afraid I might force you to have fun?”

“I’d like to see you try,” Angel answered and instantly regretted the sensual twist to his challenging tone.



The whole scene in the kitchen at the beginning was full of ST and to have Aus watch it all knowing full well what was going on was scary and sexy.


QUOTE

At the conclusion of her babbling session, Willow closed the distance between them and wrapped her arms around his waist, hugging tightly. Angelus stared down at her with a panicked look on his face. He wasn’t certain what to do. The evil vampire had never been in a situation that involved spontaneous hugging, except from Cordelia.

Angelus put the glass bowl down on the top of the fish tank and gave Willow a quick hug. The brief squeeze was noted with amusement by Cordelia as she entered the room. “Hands off, girl,” she joked. “That’s my manpire. Stick to your werewolf and we won’t have to wrestle on the floor like the Tweedles do.”



The fish stuff was sooooo wonderful. It is amazing that the Scourge of Europe is the one trying to be friends with the Scoobs while soul boy just can't get the hang of it. Of course, Aus is the more outgoing and charming one, so it makes sense. And, the next scene with the "Tweedles" chase, LMAO!


QUOTE

“At least it’s the pretty one,” Cordelia mumbled when the others started laughing. “I’ve wanted to slap you in the face a time or two, Willow, but I never thought it would be with a wet fish.”



Probably my favorite quote!! ROTLMAO!

C/A in the kitchen was great with A wanting to show what being a "master" could really be about and having to remind himself he was with Buffy. And, later, the confrontation with Aus/A and Cordy accidentally hurting Aus's feelings and running after him...*sniff*...just beautiful.

Loved this chapter!! More, more!! 

KATRINA:

 

I just love your Angelus soooo much. He is sweet to Willow, he has a sense of humour, he is sexy and now the poor baby is hurt. I hope that Cordy catches up to him soon and reassures him of her love in any way necessary

And poor Angel, having such doubts about the reason (je Buffy) for his drastic decision in the first place. And I love how he noticed Buffy's petulance and felt the need to apologise, it really shows the deterioration in the relationship so clearly.

As usual this is wonderfully written, I don't know how you do it, I am impressed. Great job, looking forward to more soon. 

SI_CRAZY:

 

Great chapter!!! I am so loving this story. I really liked when Angelus was sweet with Willow. But in the end I felt sorry for him when he though that Cordy didn't want to be his mate. Hope you post again soon. 

ZANITA:

 

I love this story so much! This was a wonderful addition, can't wait for more!! 

TIPDIP:

 

Nice job again, Lysa..

Loved the Willow/Aus hug and how he was thoughtful enough to get her some fish to replace the ones he killed...

Loved the C/A interaction in the kitchen with had a hint of sexual tension..

And the C/A/Aus triangle...yeesh! Poor Aus, thinking that Cordy doesn't want to be his mate..

KIMMERS:

 

Love this and can't wait for more please write more soon
from Kimmers

 


LUCKYLYN:

 

I can't wait to see when Cordy figures out what Angel's feelings are towards her and which vamp she'll chose. That scene with Willow and Angelous was so sweet. Post more soon.

 


IMPRESS:

 

Just one word. MORE! 

CALIFI:

 

Love this so much I just have to leave even more FB...The W/aus interaction was so sweet- and Xander was his usual annoying yet loveable self. C/A was hot hot hot- but so is the C/Aus! Arrgh! what a bind!

Buffy just opens that mouth and puts so many feet in it, it just isnt funny any more- and her snide comments to Cordy are well out of order. its one thing to bitch to her face - but in front of the Scoobies; especially X! Go Angel - his annoyance was classic!

Can't wait to see this Tattoo 'claim' come to a head, oh, momma! A is on the edge, baby, and I can't wait until he crosses the line.


Jumping up and down in excitement, waiting for the next installment of this wonderful fic. *G*

Calxxwubs 

QUEEN C:

 

This really is great! But I have to admit that as much as I'm enjoying the C/Aus interaction, I find my loyalty lying with Angel. I'm really anxious to see what happens when Cordy figures out that Angel isn't joking about his feelings and the Order's rules. Can't wait to see what happens between C/A!

Please post more soon.

Lori

 


KATRINA:

 

How do I love this story? Let me count the ways.

quote:


From his position in the doorway, Angelus chuckled in response. Suggesting, “Don’t give him ideas, babe. He has enough of his own already.”




Love the warmth between Angelus and Cordy, when he calls her babe I get all melty inside, it's so sweet.

quote:


Staring up at the vampire, Willow could hardly believe the offer. Tears stung her eyes at the memory of finding her little fish strung up knowing that evil Angelus had been in her bedroom to accomplish the deed. Now he freely made a peace offering.


 



This was so sweet, I love that he is making things up to Willow.

I just love it all and I could keep quoting, but this would just get out of control. Love your Angelus, love the way you have the slow deterioration in Buffy/Angel, love the building of tension between Cordy/Angel, just love it all to bits. Great job. 

HELEN:

 

Hi Lysa

I'm with Kat, love this fic to bits. Angel and Angelus are to hot too count and Angel needs to get himself a real woman , 'cept of course his brother already has her

Damn, whats a poor vamp to do?

Can't wait for the next part, can I be greedy and say chop, chop!

Hugs, Helen

 


IZZYCHASE:

 

Good job, Lysa! I loved the way Angelus made up the fish incident to Willow- that was nice. The B/A is deteriorating quite nicely and slowly, and I love the way you're writing that.

Poor Angelus! I hope Cordy finds a way to *make it up to him*

I still find myself rooting for C/Aus, despite the rules of the Order and Angel's growing feelings, but I'll be happy with whatever ending you deem appropriate, Lysa. 

LIZZY:

 

Lysa, you're doing a great job with this story. I love the similarities and the differences between A and Aus. Cordy's interactions with both of them are fascinating. I can't decide where you plan to take this story. I am absolutely riveted.

 


SI_CRAZY:

 

Amazing chapter!!! This fic just gets better and better. I loved the way you wrote Angelus and Willow interaction. Now I can't wait to read the next part and see how will Angelus and Cordy conversation be. So, please, post again soon. 

ISLANDGIRL_CHE:

 

Waiting for more......

NAIRI:

 

This story gets better and better with every new chapter, i can´t begine to tell you how much i love it. I can´t wait to read more. Please post again soon.
Nairi

 


RUBY:

 

Wow! I so can't wait to see what happens next!

Update soon!

Ruby

KIMMERS:

 PART 19

Lysa,
As always you ahve outdone yourself with this i think that what we want though is a littlke more action i think that Angel wants a little action too but not with Buffy
from Kimmers 

SI_CRAZY:

 

Wonderful chapter, Lysa!!!! You're doing a damn good job. Please, post more soon. 

HELEN:

 

Hi Lysa

Loved it as usual, everything from the conversations and 'complaints' *wink* to well everything.

I love this fic - I may have mentioned that

Hugs, Helen 

CALIFI:

 

I've gone on and on and on and on about this fic - and this part is perrrrrfect! Alsways amazes me when you wonder if its 'okay', because its not - it's more than 'okay' - its brilliant, wonderful, smoochy sexy hot dark - Angel jealousy is just sooo sexy as hell, Aus is so sweethotcute [ack! did I just say that?] Cordy is WOW!- no wonder they both want her so bad!

Cannot wait for the next parts- wow, pains me to wait! I'm just waiting for A to cross the line too much, and C/Aus reaction to it!

GILLY:

 

Yeah, another great part, I love how you write both A's and C, her reactions are spot on.

Loved this part:

QUOTE

“To tell Angel to keep his ears to himself. To say…I don’t know…that it wasn’t us. It was…stray cats.”

QUOTE

Laughing, the vampire revealed, “Those cats can pronounce my name rather well.”



Angel is going to explode soon, and give in?, (I hope) 

TIPDIP:

 

Wow!

Another great chapter, Lysa!

Enjoyed the conversation between C/Aus...among other things...

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Cammy

FANGGIRL:

 

Wow Not only is this fic HOT!!! I love me some C/Aus but... the image you portray is so wonderful... This chapter I believe is the best fanfic I have read on that scale. You are talented... so I say...More now please.... and if it has to be many more chapters so be it


Jill

ZANITA:

 

This just get better and better. Angel's angst is building to a fever pitch and here's me hoping he boils over soon! 

CHRISTY:

 

I haven't finished backreading the previous chapters yet, but I couldn't resist reading ahead!! I am totally in love with your Angelus. I need one of my very own His sensitivity mixed with the bad ass vamp takes my breath away, and leaves me laying in a puddle of drool. I loved this chapter, and along with the others I've read. I gotta try to catch up real soon!!
And what did you say somewhere??? Is it this story or your other one that you are going to take time away from?? Whats the deal?? Cuz I want more of this soon!!!!!!!!!!! 

DAMNSKIPPY:

 

Wow, that was Wuthering Heights imagery good. Loved how brave Cordy was as Aus growled and stalked around her. And the picture of Angel watching her from the window with the moonlight...sooooo good.

How long can Angel keep his vampire down??? Post soon!!! 

LYSA:

 

QUOTE (christy @ Sep 5 2003, 01:09 PM)

And what did you say somewhere??? Is it this story or your other one that you are going to take time away from?? Whats the deal?? Cuz I want more of this soon!!!!!!!!!!!


It is Promise of the Night that I have on hold temporarily. I want to finish Double or Nothing first. DoN is definitely my priority right now. I have most of the next Chapter already written, but I'm squeezing in a little extra C/Aus in between. Will probably post it this weekend.

Promise of the Night (don't know if you've read it over at ST) is a sequel to Open Invitation where Angelus tricks Cordelia into letting him into her house and he ends up vamping her. PotN is basically a Vamp Cordy story with Angelus and/or Angel in it. The original ending is a C/Aus one, but I decided that I wanted to write 2 alternate endings. One where she ends up with Angel and another one where Vamp Cordy ends up with a soul.

Most of the notes for those 2 alternate endings may have been eaten up by my recent computer problems, so it will take me a while to reconstruct those from my hand written notes. 

FANGIRL:

 

Lysa Hon

You work is worth waiting for.... although I don't like too... It is great to hear that you are planning two endings for Promise I love that story and DoN is keeping me happy until you can get that posted. Your work is super super it would make Angelus growl for more and that's sayin something.

CHRISTY:

 

QUOTE (Lysa @ Sep 5 2003, 11:59 AM)


Promise of the Night (don't know if you've read it over at ST) is a sequel to Open Invitation where Angelus tricks Cordelia into letting him into her house and he ends up vamping her. PotN is basically a Vamp Cordy story with Angelus and/or Angel in it. The original ending is a C/Aus one, but I decided that I wanted to write 2 alternate endings. One where she ends up with Angel and another one where Vamp Cordy ends up with a soul.

Most of the notes for those 2 alternate endings may have been eaten up by my recent computer problems, so it will take me a while to reconstruct those from my hand written notes.


Thank you for clearing that up for me. I think I have read a part of Promise, but it must have been one of the many I started reading and lost track of. I will look for it and catch up on that when I'm all caught up on DoN. 

LYSA:

 

QUOTE (DamnSkippy @ Sep 5 2003, 01:30 PM)

Wow, that was Wuthering Heights imagery good.



Wuthering Heights with smut. Wow! I think Emily Bronte is rolling over in her grave right now.



As for Angel...the answer is....not long. 

IMPRESS:

 

I already left you FB at ST but I'll just say again...Great job! You do C/Aus so well. Looking forward to the Angel meltdown.


*Does funky dance and starts chanting*
GO LYSA......GO LYSA......GO LYSA......GO LYSA......GO LYSA......GO LYSA......

KATRINA:

 

I agree with everything that has already been said. This does keep getting better and better. And your imagery is so powerfully evocative.

QUOTE

Though the trees whispered their secrets with the rustling of their leaves, her ears listened to other tunes.

I just loved that line. I can hear, see, feel the scene you write so well.

Voyeur Angel? Mmm poor baby, the tension is really building there and with no release coming in the form of little miss likes to slay.

Loved it all, thank you so much. I look forward to the next part. 

KIMMERS:

 

Lysa,
Hey read this at the other board and as i said there think that we need some more action and think that Angel needs some action jsut not with buffy what ya think?
from Kimmers

 


NAIRI:

 

Amazing chapter Lysa, i wonder how long it will take for Angel to give in and take what he wants. I felt so sorry for Angelus, him not having his bite is just not fair. Loved this and can´t wait for more, plaese post again soon.
Nairi

 


SI_CRAZY:

 

Amazing part!!!! I am so loving this fic!!! Looking forward to read more. 

LUCKYLYN:

 

I can't wait for the next part. Post more soon

 


NC2224:

 

Another outstanding chapter...

Once again you had me hooked and I read and re-read this chapter. I am absolutely loving C/Aus. Don't get me wrong, I feel bad for Angel, but he needs to work out his issues with Buffy and stop spying on his bro. Hopefully, you'll work out something that doesn't leave anyone out in the cold -- well, I wouldn't mind Buffy being left in a blizzard
And the steamy sex scene left me panting for more. Those two are just hot, hot, hot!
You said you were almost done with chapter 20. Does that mean it will posted shortly? I'll try to wait patiently, but I can't promise anything.

 


IMPRESS:

 

Lysa...hun...that was....*whew*. You write C/Aus so well. And I agree it sucks Angelus can't claim her the way he wants to. *sigh* And Angel...how long is it going to take before he snaps and takes what or rather who, he really wants.

Glad you posted it early. Now bring on 20.

 


KATRINA:

Lysa, again with another fabulous chapter in a wonderful story. I bow down to your genius.

I love the way Cordy chased Angelus, ignoring the pain and the cold. And how she enticed him out; she has such inner strength and intuition. Her biting him and making their claim official was really touching (and hot). And when Angelus calls her baby, I just go all warm inside, it's so tender.

quote:


Reeling her back into the sphere of his embrace, Angelus settled his arms around her waist. “There’s a hot shower upstairs with your name on it. After you’re properly dried and fluffed, I’m going to toss and tumble you into that huge bed of ours.”




Mm tossing and tumbling can't wait. Great job, thank you so much for sharing with us.

 


IZZYCHASE:

 

Great job, Lysa!

This is arguably my favorite chapter so far. The garden scene was so dark, gothic, passionate, and steamy at the same time- reminds me of Anne Rice's Savage Garden of Vampires... very gothic touch, Lysa!

I loved the way Cordy "made it up to Angelus": way to get his attention, Cordy!

The C/Aus is perfect right now, although I do wish there is a way for Angel to resolve his angst problems.

I'm so glad you did a scene out in the garden- I was secretly hoping for that, since Cordy and Angelus pretty much did it in every room of the mansion. :P Adds a very vampiric and gothic touch!

 


CELESTE:

 

I love this story!!! and while I love the relationship between Angelus and Cordy...I do want Angel to be with Cordy. I feel so bad for him....poor guy can't catch a break. Angelus comes and wins the heart of an beautiful woman, a woman who accepts Angelus all the way. Something I really think Angel wants and needs. UGH!!! Its so hard to decide who to keep Cordy with and with your writing I'm going back and forth between wanting her with Angelus or Angel. You rock!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

 


SCOOBYSNAX:

 

i love this damn story 

HELEN:

 

PARTS 20 & 21

WOW, speechless totally hot smut, Lysa

Phew, OK need to clear my screen and unfizzle my wits. WhIle I'm here tho, Yay Angel's starting to butt in and Cordy's noticing him. hmmm trouble's a brewin' me thinks.

Post more soon !

Hugs, Helen  

KIMMERS:

 

             welel jsut had to read this before i went to bed so can't wait to see what you come up with next
from Kimmers 

TIPDIP:

 

Another amazing chapter, Lysa!

Loved the smut scene between C/Aus and the ST between C/A. What's the girl gonna do now...? I loved the scene where Angel tied her wrists w/the scarf! He knows what he wants!
She has to know that Angel wants her and the thought alone is getting her aroused....to where Angelus even knows...

Wow! What a triangle!

And poor Buffy? Someones feeling left out (sing-song).

What a great way of waking up finding 2 more chapters done, Lysa!

Great job!
Cammy 

NAIRI:

 

              WOW!
Amazing chapter as always Lysa, very hot . Loved the way A/C reacted to one another in the store, looks like Angel is planning someting, and somehow i don´t think Cordy will mind if he does. Maybe Cordy will get to call him master after all.
Once again i love this fic and can´t wait to read the next part, please post again soon.
Nairi 

LUCKYLYN:

 

Damn, Lysa, you do know what a soulless vampire likes. I'm loving that you've got the two vamps switching places. Aus is so caring and tender (for the most part) and Angel is turning into his evil alter ego. Are the two going to meet somewhere in the middle? On top of Cordy? *teehee*

Keep writing, babe. I can't wait to see when vamps collide!!

CALIFI:

 

Darn! Everyone's said what I wanna say - so can't wait till Angel loses it *wibble*

Brilliant, brilliant. Soooo can't wait *tongue hanging out*

KATRINA:

 

Wow another great part Lysa, just wow. I would quote my favourite parts, but that would just be too many.

I love how Angel is getting more touchy towards Cordy and how she is beginning to notice him too. And I just totally love your Angelus, that man-pire is incredible, hot, sweet, tender, funny, sensitive. I want one. Tension is building, oh yeah, can't wait to see where your incredible mind takes this. 

CHRISTY:

 

Angel's slipping.....he's gonna lose it soon.... I can feel it!

Lysa, I wuv you, hehe........your amazing as always. I can see why/how you have a hard time writing this stuff....good god.....this would melt a 1000 ton glacier 

SUNSCORCHED:

 

You said you had lotsa Aus action and you seriously delivered didn'tcha?! Loved this part.. of course I loved this part there was Aus smut in it!

But not just that, we have Angel really starting to lose the plot and we have Angelus noticing while Buffy is still snorkling in denial. Damn, that river must be nice eh? The smackdown between Angel/Angelus is sure to be severely nail biting and I for one can't wait.

You are taking this fic to new levels Lysa, you are wasted on fanfic I tell ya. 

SI_CRAZY:

 

Good chapters!!! I loved this part! The sex scene and the bondage little game at the store, were really HOT!! Hope you post more soon. 

CALIFI:

 

PARTS 20 & 21

The Green Demon raises it's ugly head!

This wasn't enough *whine* I could read this allll day, Lysa! Loved the Mall scene and the interaction going on between A/C/B - brilliant!

More soon please. 

NC2224:

 

You just made my Sunday morning...

Another outstanding couple of chapters. The sex scene was steamy as always. And you have captured C/Aus perfectly. But imho, Angel is cruising for a bruisin'. He is a all touchy feely, grabby hands. I'm just waiting for Angelus to snap-- I thought for sure the little bondage game between C/A would have been it. And I'm still rooting for C/Aus. Can't wait for more.

 


IMPRESS:

 

*pounces* It's mine...it's all mine! *evil laughter*

*clears throat* I mean Great job Lysa. That was so..hot. I can't decide though, which I want more, Angelus snapping or Angel snapping. Cordy to end up with Angelus or Angel. Can I have both?

 


HELEN:

 

Hi Lysa

LOVE this part, hot stuff always and your smut rocks chica.

Hugs, Helen

DAMNSMIPPY:

 

The best Aus/C sex ever!! And I love the subtle reblending of A/Aus personalities. Whatever is Cordy going to do. Torn between two lovers...

More!!!

RUBY:

 

wow this story just gets better and better!

Can't wait for more!

Ruby

 


SI_CRAZY:

 

Great chapters!!! Full of smut and really hot!!! I'm looking forward to read more. 

KATRINA:

 

Mmm Lysa smut. Loved this part as usual. I like how tender Angelus can be, ensuring that Cordy was thoroughly warm and ok before begining to 'claim' her.

I liked Angel tying her up too, that was a great scene, and Buffy is so clueless it's funny.

Keep up the great work.

 


DANNYBLUE:

 

I want Cordy to end up with Angel...I think. Because Cordy with Angelus is rockin' at the moment. But I'm loving the signs of jealousy with Angel. And that whole bondage thing had my screen sizzling.

Things are getting even more intense, and I likes it!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

 


PSYCHOFILLY:

 

I dunno, Danielle. I kinda want to see her with both for a little while. Why choose, when you can have a threesome? Though, I guess it would be a little weird sharing with your brother. Hell. I don't know. 

AMZ_da_ANGEL:

 

I really am hooked to this story. The C/Aus is *hot* and the C/A sexual tension...whoa. *fans self*

Can't wait 4 more.

 


LYSA:

 

I love you guys!!! All this feedback is great. Keep it up...I'm addicted to it ya know.

It is so much fun writing Double or Nothing. You're all in a tizzy. There's the pro-Angel faction, the pro-Angelus faction, the pro-threesome faction and even an anti-threesome faction.

I can't wait to see how this ends. Oh. Wait a minute. I'm writing this aren't I? *Gulp* Guess that means that I have to pick.

Truthfully, I already know what's going to happen. I just have to get you there. *Grins Evilly*

Only one thing left to officially cover from Scorchy's challenge and then the rest is up to me. *nervous butterflies*

Thanks again for reading!

__________________
~Lysa~

 


ANDREA:

 

Lysa, I replied to this, this morning but my reply is not here for some strange reason. Weird. Never mind. Loving this can't wait for more.

As you know, I'm torn between wanting more C/Aus and Angel showing Cordy exactly what him being her master means *g*.

 


N2224:

 

I know I already responed, but...

 

I've been mulling it over. And while I am a gung-ho C/Aus fan in this case, I guess I will *settle* for a hot steamy threesome if I have to. Who am I kidding...bring on the hot steamy threesome. And after that, I'll decide which ship I'm on. Just don't make Cordy cheat on Angelus. I'd be so disappointed in her. Ok,ok, no more opinions or pressure from me...at least until the next chapter. 

CALIFI:

 

PARTS 22, 23, 24

Just a quick note b/f I read it, Lysa: re: pic url.... if you delete the bit where it says 'sachielk' and type 'angelcalgoteam' it will show itself.

Right, off to read!


I'm back, and I still love it - even more! Angel is a naughty boy, and i love it! surprised Buffy seemed so accepting, but that probably won't last [i hope! ]

Brilliant, Lysa *sigh* loving this sooo much!  

SUNSCORCHED:

 

Hot Diggity Dog Ziggity, what the thought of AngelTwins does to me!!!

Damn Lysa, where do I start? The beach scene between B/A was HOT, yet again you managed to pull off TV worst couple and made it a joy to read! Excellently done on that score.

The beginning of end for the Slayer and her vamp methinks!

QUOTE

Cordelia suddenly saw the pool table in a new light


Me too funnily enough!!

I loved how Angelus finally got to smack Angel in his mush, I'm surprised it never happened sooner. Though there was that time in the library just after they were seperated! Heehee, I loved that line!

"What's the matter? Did the Slayer swallow your balls the last time she went down on you?!"

Or something like that anyway!!!

Yes, the pressure has built and the eruption is gonna be super spectacular complete with fire works and lava bombs. You can so tell Volcano has been playing on my VCR!!!

I got a shock when it was Angelus to approach Giles about Angel's lack of control.

QUOTE

“I invite you in, Angelus.”


I bet Giles despised himself for saying that. An excellent ending to three thrilling parts! I was just about to stalk you for this but you deserve a break. So sit back with a Kit Kat and cup of steaming hot Typhoo tea while you chill and bathe in your success at having thrilled us all!!! 

HELEN:

 

Lysa

Hot damn, what Scorchy said, unbelievable and not to mention chilling at the end. I have no idea which way this is gonna twist and I can't wait to find out.

Helen 

NAIRI:

 

WOW!
Lysa, i posted feedback on ST but wanted to tell you again that this fic is amazing. I loved it and want more of it.
Nairi 

DAMNSKIPPY:

 

The twists and turns and slowly building tension with all four of them is amazing. You have such patience as a writer. Brava!

I second the beach scene being hot as hell. My inner bitch did chortle at the fact that Buffy didn't get to come. *heehee* Thanks for that little detail.

Poor, Cordy. Angel hurt her feelings. Damn stupid vampire!

Wow! I can't wait to find out what's up. What Giles feared would happen. I'm all tingly with anticipation!

CHRISTY:

 

Lysa dear, all I have to say is....more, and quickly!!! I'm dying to know "what we feared has come to pass" 

KATRINA:

 

QUOTE

Angel heard the plea in her voice and watched her lips tremble only inches from his own. “Friends? We’ve never been friends, sweetheart.”


That was so sad, when he said that, but in a sexy foreboding kind of way. The sad comes from the fact that we later find out he really hurt Cordy's feelings, damn him, I'm glad Angelus punched him.

I'm intrigued by Angelus going to Giles, what is it that they fear? Hmm great place to leave us.

The beach scene was great, Angel was all forceful and sexy and take charge, oops got a little distracted there.

Wonderfu job as usual Lysa, you maintain such a high standard in your writing, it's incredible. 

SI_CRAZY:

 

Great chapter!!! Angel is losing it, right???? Please, tell me!!!!
Ok, I know I have to wait to read it in the next chapters, but please, post them soon. 

GILLY:

 

Yeah, Lysa more great parts.

It's really hotting up now, loved the hot beach scene and Buffy loosing out. te he

Angelus going to Giles he must be desperate!

I'm dying to know how you're going to resolve this, but not too soon I hope, after all we don't want it to end.

JENBUG13:

 

PARTS 22, 23, 24

That was great!! Can't wait to see what happens next. 

NAIRI:

 

OMG! Lysa that was amazing, Angel is really losing it isn´t he. I loved the way you wrote the argument between him and Angelus. I can hardly wait to read the next part. I hope you will explain what is going on with Angelus and Giles, what is it that they fear. I have so many questiones runing around in my head that need to be answered, so please have mercy and post again soon.
Nairi

 


CELESTE:

 

OH MY!!! That was soooo good!!! I can't wait to find out what's the big thing Giles was talking about and who Cordy ends up choosing!!! Don't keep us waiting to long...thanks!!! You rock!

 


ANDREA:

 

And you stopped there because?

Excellent chapters Lysa. I really can't wait to see what happens next. The C/A in that chapter was really hot. Poor Cordy, Angel can be such a dumbass sometimes.

Please post more soon 

AMZ_da_ANGEL:

 

I gotta agree with And, and you stopped there because?

LOL, excellent chapter Lysa, I am really loving this so far, the way you've written this is just wow. I'm definately hooked and squeal everytime I see a new chapter is up.

Angel is definately creeping me out and I can't wait 2 see how things go with C/Aus and B/A and if there ever will be C/A/Aus 

KATRINA:

 

quote:


“So, what we feared has come to pass,” Giles accepted the realization calmly having expected this for some time. Stepping back, he opened the door wider. “I invite you in, Angelus.”




Wow Lysa, fantastic job as usual, and what a place to end. Love it.

I enjoyed reading Buffy's hypocrisy in having sex on the beach (mm sounds like a cocktail ). And Angel's serious degeneration and lack of control is really powerful.

Loved how Angelus was so upset cos Angel hurt Cordy by saying he wasn't her friend. I could keep going there are so many bits I love, as usual. Fantastic writing, I'm really looking forward to more, hopefully soon. 

CORDELIA'S DESTINY:

 

Wow, Lysa! Great chapter. I'm so looking forward to how you're going to wrap all of this up. In this part, I really liked how you showed that Angel is becoming darker and darker. It's almost like he and Angelus have flipped roles or something. And I love that you're finally paying off all the mysterious hushed whispers from the beginning of the fic about the deal with the Morae. Can't wait to see if our two fab vamps will be fused together again. Wow! Great writing.

Like Amz_da_Angel, I totally get psyched when I see that new chapters are posted. Can't wait for more! Please post soon.

Jules 

IMPRESS:

 

Dammit, how dare you leave it there?

Seriously great chapter. Angel's loss of control is so...chilling, Cordelia's being hurt by not being Angel's friend, Angelus and Giles meeting, hell it was all good. Can't wait for more. 

SI_CRAZY:

 

Great chapter!!! I can't wait to see what Giles and Angelus are talking about. Hope you post more soon. 

RACHELLE:

 

Yipee! Kicking booty as usual, Lysa 

LUCKYLYN:

 

This is amazing. I can't wait to see what Giles and Angelus have to talk about. Poor Angel he's trying so hard to resist his feelings. 

RUBY:

 

How can you just leave it there like that?

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Please update soon!

Ruby 

HELEN:

 

Hi Lysa

Sorry Babe, thought I'd posted here.

What can I say I love this fic, the tension between Cordy and Angel was brilliantly written and the B/A was scary which is how I prefer it.

I CANNOT wait for the next part, so hurry up with it 'kay.

Hugs, Helen

 


FRAZI:

 

Took you long enough. I just can't imagine the yumminess that you're created. I mean suddenly I'm seeing role switching with Angel and Angelus! Delicious! You soooo rock. MOre soon? I can resort to blackmail 

ATHLANTIS:

 

Wow, you so left me hanging on last chapter! I hope Cordy ends with angelus though, Angel is so been a dumbass as always, Cordy should call Angelus next time Angel is trying to make a move on her, that would so piss Angelus off!

CALIFI:

 

PARTS 25, 26, 27

Oh, my! *swoon*

A C/A fic is not the same without a spanking!

Loved the talk between B/A, it was exellent and perfect. The kitchen scene had me majorly hot and bothered - whew! LOVE Angel in this *sigh* I want some NOW!

I know Cordy loves Angelus, but how can she possibly resist Angel the way he is now? -Mad, Bad and dangerous to know, as Hely commented on the other day.

You are always generous with your chapters, but it's still never enough! lol! Already I'm waiting for yet more.

-Did I tell you how much I love Angel in this?

Again for the spanking - I think that should be obligatory in a Dark Angel fic, cos we all love it sooo much- and that's kinda scary!

Keep writing, and thanks for some more ideas for my DisCord! *goes off to do some angst, baby! *  

IMPRESS:

 

That was...WOW. Damn that was HOT & GOOD and a great many more wonderful descriptions that my brain just can't come up with.

The talk between b and A was well done, and I liked the fight between the two bros. The kitchen scene...well that was just...yummy.

Oh and I just adored Cordy walking out of the house.

MORE NOW...er I mean SOON. 

SUNSCORCHED:

 

I have so much to say about this so here I go...

Part 25

The first thing to captivate me here was the conversation between Giles and Angelus, it was strained but yet civilised though I would have loved to have seen Giles' reaction when Aus told him about Angel biting Buffy. Excellent portrayal of both characters here and you got it just right so well done!

Poor Cordy being left on her own to deal with the nightmare with only Angel to rescue her from it. There are times when I really envy her. Bitch!!! Loved how it was Angelus' turn to walk on the purring scene, how he managed not to kill his brother is beyond me.


QUOTE

Lifting her hazel gaze, Cordelia’s mouth trembled almost imperceptibly as she gave in to her curiosity, “Did she like it? Angelus said if it’s done right it can make you both come.”



I'd give anything to hear this particular line on the show! I could so imagine the expression DB would have to pull, i don't know what's more scary the fact that I want it to happen or the fact that I can picture it!! Thought the bedroom scene was a combination of hotness with the addition of the biting talk, it was sweet with the way he could talk to her and it had the right amount of tension between the two.

Part 26

The Bronze, a few pieces in this had me giggling as your writing once again had my brain filled with images!

I could so see Angel hopping around on the dance floor doing the bunny hop, his fingers curled up like paws and a pair of ears on his head!! Heehee, you have to stop writing stuff like that Lysa or one of these days I'm gonna choke on my Typhoo!

Loved the way Angelus taunted Buffy, and well done for having him call her 'Buff.'


QUOTE

“I always thought it would be me, Buff. Though I promise you I would have finished the job, not just taken a taste.”



I can not begin to tell you how much I loved this line, God he's such a oooh ya know?! Another image I got was poor Angel being sandwiched between to smooching couples and sitting there with a very unimpressed look on his face!

Willow and Oz would be on one side while Cordy and Angelus on the other, that would be hilarious and makes me wish ME had hired you instead of JW!!

The entire conversation between Angel and Buffy was simply wonderful, the characterisation was spot on with the darkness in Angel making him almost remorseless in some of the things he said. You brought out how he reacted on instinct by having him circle his prey and you had the Slayer instinct kicking off in response. I was desperate to see them throwing down.

Part 27

What can I say apart from hot-a-rama! The kitchen scene sizzled, the following fighting sizzled and the spanking was delicious! There's a lot to be said for being spanked by a vampire and yet again I say Cordy's a bitch, a lucky one none the less!! I could imagine how she would feel being treated like a piece of property being fought over and I'm in agreement that it sucks so it was a good thing she walked out.

She is coming back though, right?!

Loved DarkAngel and how he was expressing his rights over the Order of Aurelius and Cordy, loved how Angelus denied him those rights. It seems to me as if Angelus' Bad Boy title is up for grabs and the way his brother is I'm in two minds as to who I'm betting on!

Again another three sublime chapters in this hot/funny/wonderful fic of yours and I just have to say how much I'm loving this. You deserve so much more than a meddle, how about a yearly subscription to NekkidAngel magazine and a company car?!

MORE!!!

LYSA:

 

QUOTE

how about a yearly subscription to NekkidAngel magazine and a company car?!


Would that be the car being sold on E-Bay....with DB in it as my oh-so-hot chauffeur????

If not, just fork over the NekkidAngel subscription and I'll still be a happy woman!


As for spankings and the Bunny Hop, I'm not sure which creates a darker image in my head. That dance is damn scary if you ask me!



Smoochies for all the feedback. 

HELEN:

 

Lysa

I’m doing your trick and just read this in work, so forgive the lack of quoting DAMMIT, I loved every bit of it.. I was going to wait til I got home to give FB, but just had to login straight away!, sod the IT department.

That was so f**king hot, it was untrue. I can’t even express how much I loved the talk between Buffy and Angel and Angel and Cordy and Angel and Angelus etc, etc etc.

As for the spankin Hmmm just why is that so hot?? Dunno don’t care.

This is so damn intriguing and exciting I’m still jumping inside and out. Please post the next part soon.

Luv, Helen 

TIPDIP:

 

The Angel in this fic was *hot*! And the spanking......? Hotter!


Post soon!


Cammy

DAMNSKIPPY:

 

I'm pretty much speechless. I marvel at your ability to ever so slowly build and build and build the tension without it ever dragging. I second the scenes everyone else as already discussed. Plus, the image of Aus and Cordy in the Bronze going at it, her back against Angel's arm, her hand on Angel's thigh, his eyes closed smelling her hair and the fantasy we all know he was having...OMG, that was so good. I know, lame comment, but whew!

Damn, girl. That's all I can say. Damn!

HESPERUS:

 

Lysa, that was f***king su-perb! Each new chapter just blows me away. I love the way that their personalities have swapped over, each acting the way you expect his twin to. Kinda felt sorry for Angelus in this one though. 

NAIRI:

 

How do you begin to describe your feelings about a fic that is so amazing it just leaves you numb. That is how i feel at this moment. Lysa this was sexy, hot and did i say hot. Loved the conversation between Giles and Angelus, who would have known that there would come a time when Angelus would be the voice of reason. I loved the talk between Angel and Buffy, it was about time and for some strange reason i even felt sorry for Buffy. The scene with the wiped cream, had me cheking my fridge for some. Then i remembered f***k no Angel here.
The spanking well that was the topping.
Please post again soon, i need some more.
Nairi 

CHRISTY:

 

Lysa!! This was well worth the wait....Damn girl! Where to begin here...the hotness at the bronze was, well, hot. Cordy inbetween her two vamps, how sexy, even if Angel wasn't getting as much action as Aus. Oh, and the kitchen scene...Wow...Angel is acting more like Aus than Aus is these days. I kinda felt for Aus there when he figured out what went on in the kitchen. And I feel for Angel as well, he wants her so bad. I'm torn dammit, I love Aus, and I love Angel, especially when Angel is being all dominant and sexy as hell!!
I am awestruck Lysa. These 3 chapters were amazing, and there wasn't even any sex! I simply cannot wait for more!! I want fricking spoilers here!! 

NOBODY'S ANGEL:

 

Lysa, I must say that I spent the day catching up on this fic and it's absolutely brilliant!! I love every bit of this and I cannot wait for more more more!!! Great job and keep it up!! 

GILLY:

 

Wow, more great chapters, Lysa. Seriously hot and intense. Superb.

I'm wondering how you are going to resolve this without someone getting hurt.

Is she going home dressed like that?? Can't wait for more- please keep it coming.

KATRINA:

 

Mental note if I insist on coming late to the party all the good feedback will be already said. I echo all the above. Lysa I think I love you. This was brilliant. And mm there was spanking, always a bonus.

Loved the way you captured Cordy's feelings so well in the kitchen, the struggle she was having and the way she went up to explain things to Angelus. This was so wonderful. Thanks.

Hugs

Kat 

SI_CRAZY:

 

Amazing chapters!!!! Right now this is my favourite fic. Please, post the next chapter soon. 

IMPRESS:

 

PARTS 25, 26, 27

I left you FB at AO but I had to say again.

DAMN this is GOOD! I am soo looking forward to seeing how the two vamps work out who gets Cordelia. And looking forward to seeing how Cordelia deals with the two vamps.

MORE.MORE.MORE.MORE.MORE.MORE.MORE.MORE.
NOW.NOW.NOW.NOW.NOW.NOW.NOW.NOW. OR
SOON.SOON.SOON.SOON.SOON.SOON.SOON.SOON.

ANDREA:

 

That was really great Lysa. I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Angel and Angelus fighting over what Angel did to Cordy was great.

I'm glad Buffy and Angel have split up, bet you didn't see that coming lol

Please write more soon, I'm very looking forward to seeing what happens next 

RUBY:

 

Damn I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Please update soon

Ruby 

LUCKYLYN:

 

Post more soon cause I'm dying to find out what happens next. How will Angel and Angelus come to an agreement about Cordy and what will they have to do to get back in her good graces and make her return? This is great. 

CORDELIA'S DESTINY:

 

Wow. I always say that when I reply to this story, but just, WOW.

Can't ever say enough how much I freakin' love this. You're the fic goddess. Makes me squeal everytime I see another posting.

I love how you're making Angel so dark, how he's totally obsessed with Cordelia and how she can't help but be drawn to him despite her love for Angelus. I can't wait for the payoff with the deal with the morae. Will they be fused back together? Will Cordelia have to choose? Will one or both of them die? Will Angel turn into Angelus and vice versa? Ahhh!! the possibilities have my head spinning.

And damn, girl, just when I think I've seen it all, you bring out the leather and whipped cream. Jiminey Christmas, that was somethin' else. Hot, Hot, Hot!

keep it comin'! Pretty please, and soon!!

 

__________________
Jules

ALICE:

 

Wowza!

I'm not really coherent enough to add anything to that at the moment - I'm going to need a few minutes to get over that one

Love where you're taking this 

RUBY:

 

quote:


Everything that Angel told him that day in his office suggested that this deal with the Moirae could quickly go sour.


 



That sounds very bad!

Loved these chapters, they were beyond hot


Ruby

AMBROSIA:

 

I have only one thing to say: more, more, more! 

SI_CRAZY:

 

Great!!! Amazing!!!! Good!!!! Excellent!!!!
These are the best chapters ever!!!!! I need you to post the next part soon, or else I`m gonna go nuts with the waiting

BIBLIOPHILE:

 

I just started reading this fic tonight and it was so good I couldn't stop until I caught up with all the parts. The only problem I have is that I couldn't find the thread for Parts 3 & 4 so I don't know what the deal is with the Moirae. But even without that I'm loving the story and can't wait to see who Cordy picks.

KATRINA:

 

Another fantastic instalment, but then when isn't something you write fantastic? Never that's when.

I love how you've slowly developed Angel's feelings for Cordelia and his growing darkness. I love how Angelus is the voice of reason, approching Giles of all people.

quote:


Champagne and roses weren’t in the cards tonight


Love that line.

I loved the thought of seeing Angel and Angelus fighting and the spanking? Oh yeah, always good.

quote:


Angelus fumed at his twin, “See what you did? You have no business kissing her that way.”

“At least I kissed her!” Angel pointed out. “You spanked her in front of me.”




They are so like children. I can't wait to see where this goes. Fantastic job as always Lysa.

 


SCOOBYSNAX:

 

angel and angelus are the only two men i would ever allow to have me at once. cordy is so lucky.


LOVE the story

LIOSLAITH:

 

PARTS 28, 29, 30

Oh boy is it just me or is every parts getting tenser and tenser????

Angel is definitely loosing it BIG TIME now!!!

It seems without Angelus he is having mucho problems controlling his demon side. His soul is loosing control to his vampire side, it seems Angel needs Angelus to control that side of him.

So I guess that answers one question, eh? So much for Angel not needing Angelus, I love that about this fic!! The fact that many stories see the complete removal of Angelus and how Angel is in complete control wihout his interferance and it's all coming up roses!!! This shows the complete opposite, that loosing Angelus from his personality can have the opposite effect and Angel seems to loose control of his demon ... ignoring his soul in the process.

But Cordy isn't gonna leave RIGHT? RIGHT? RIGHT?


Don't think for one momento that I haven't noticed how crueler your cliffhangers have become with every new post of this fic???!!!


Look forward to the next part(s) ... want to see how Aus reacts to what Angel did (and tried to do) to Cordy .... and how Buffy (and the others) react to Angel's descent into darkness ... also do we learn now what they told Giles might happen by splitting them?? But we are seeing it more and more from Angel in the last two sets of postings aren't we?

But no hurry? You'll have it up soon ... like an hour right???!!!


Lio  

HELEN:

 

WOW Lysa

What can I say, blown away much. Such tension and the way you have written this is just outstanding and superb. Poor Cordy stuck in the middle, (am I kidding oh to have such a problem) between Angel and Angelus.

I echo Lio Angel really does not Angelus doesn’t he, how sad is it that it doesn’t seem to be vice versa, poor Angel.

You have taken this fic places that is so addictive to anyone who reads it. Cannot describe how much I NEED the next parts. Geeze Hun would begging help!

BFSH,Helen 

NAIRI:

 

And you stop there because? Are you tryeing to kill me?
Lysa this was amazing, fabulous and breathtaking. Angel is loosing it, and loosing it fast, the demon in him is taking over and you have shown in the last couple of chapters that the soul isn´t anough. Angel needs Angelus more than he will ever realise. I have all this questiones in my head that need to be answered, like what will happen when Angelus finds out ? Will Cordy leave town and the two men who love her? Will Angel go ahead and claim her against her wishes or will she give in and let him? Oh god for the sake of my sanity please post again soon.
Nairi 

NOBODY'S ANGEL:

 

I second what everyone has said. More soooooooon!!!!

Hey, check it out! It's Angel and Angelus fighting over Cordy!! Sorry...severe lack of sleep...LOL

Great chapters! LOVE IT! And you so need to post more VERY VERY soon!! 

TIPDIP:

 

(Well..these thud smilies are a couple of "I'm not worthy! I'm not worthy" bows to you, Lysa)

I don't even know where to begin. This was just absolutely fantastic. I'd quoted and say something about each quote, but I'm afraid my response to your fic would be as long as these chapters.

So let me end this by telling you how hot this was. I loved the sexy interchange between Angel and Cordelia and OMFG! Angel was so dark/beige that nearly peed myself wondering how far he was going to go with Cordy!

And Cordy might leave? NOOOO! Oh and the final promise that Angel made towards her:

QUOTE

“This is more of a game than you know, Cordelia. I’m playing to win,” Angel told her somewhat cryptically. “Maybe this wasn’t the time for us, sweetheart, but soon it will be. I promise you. Next time, there won’t be interruptions


GGaaaahahh!

My hat off to you, my dear!



Post soon please?

Hugs
Cammy

HESPERUS:

 

Oh, I adored this. I loved Willow's, "You said no to naked Angel and whipped cream." made me burst out laughing. Angelus needs to take a bit more affirmative action or he's gonna lose his girl. But your Angel is freaking me out. I love this story and I wait with ever decreasing patience for next weeks installment! 

CHRISTY:

 

Oh my! What is going on with Angel?? (hehe, we have new smilies!!!) Angelus needs to step in here and do something before Angel goes totally off the wall. I hope Angelus stops Cordy from leaving

Ohhh, and hot stuff outside of Harm's house!!

Post very soon Lysa! 

CALIFI:

 

See? Told you Dark Angel would have all the girls humming in semi-O's I'm right there too!

I just love your Dark Angel - yummy yum yum! Give him to me and i will be sooo happy ever after [imagine having HIM all to yourself! Dwool!]

I know it's not pc, but - wowow - dominant Angel!

Waiting is sooo hard to do, and i wanna see him claim her - be it neck or thigh - both would do me! *swoon*

So here is a reminder! more soon! mwah! & thanks for such a titillating post! 

GILLY:

 

Superb and intense Lysa. Is Cordy gonna escape or will she be stopped, and who by?

Is it my imagination or is Willow getting turned on with thoughts of 'punishment'?

What a place to leave it, please post more of this truely wonderful fic soon. 

IMPRESS:

 

I can only say I agree with everyone else. This fic is...wow. I'm sooo addicted and need another fix VERY SOON! 

SI_CRAZY:

 

Amazing chapters!!!! This fic just gets better and better. Angel is starting to freak me out, he is really scary here. Hope you post more soon.