Darkness and Daylight

Cordelia / Angel Fanfiction & Art by Lysa Whitmore

Written in May 2004

A Sequel to 

'A Night to Remember'

Fanfiction Written for the Lysa Says: Challenge Me! Thread

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PART 1 of 3 + Epilogue

This fic was originally posted as a short serial containing 3 parts and a smutty epilogue.

Posted by WRITINGPATHWAYS at ST

 

Oooh. Sigh. Details of the night! Finally. I'll admit to pathetically refreshing to just see if you posted this. I think I may have said 'Yes' out loud when I saw you had today.

I love the addition of Jenny becoming friends with Cordelia, as the rest of the gang cut her out. And yay Soul is permanent, wonder if Buffy will ever learn that Angel is Angelus -- and that normal is overrated? Oh wait, who cares... Angel is still hot for Cordy! But of course he is, the demon fell hard for her, now all the soul has to do is catch up, right?

can't wait for more!

Posted by FANG GIRL at AO

 

hmmmm nice... this is a great one.... I am awaiting more stuff I mean...smut 

Posted by HELEN at AO

 

God babe

This is soo damn good and I can't get any peace to enjoy it!!! Aaargh, will come back later and reread and leave proper FB then!

Love'n'hugs Helen 

Posted by VISIONGIRL at AO

Niiiiiicceeee. Great story. You're a genius writer, you know that right?

Characterization, dialogue, everything! You've got it all pat down. It makes me wonder whether or not you should have been the writer on Angel, maybe we would have made a more decent show (that would most likely be shown on pay-per-view, based on this story  )

Love your work. Hope to see more from you soon! 
 
Niiiiiicceeee. Great story. You're a genius writer, you know that right?

Characterization, dialogue, everything! You've got it all pat down. It makes me wonder whether or not you should have been the writer on Angel, maybe we would have made a more decent show (that would most likely be shown on pay-per-view, based on this story )

Love your work. Hope to see more from you soon! 

Posted by SUNSCORCHED at AO

 

I like it a lot!!

Sorry about the bad feedage but if you had a man stomping around your head with steel boots, your feedage would be bad too

Just wanted to let you know I love you and think you are a sparkling, little diamond!

Promise to make it up to you. After sleep and paracetamol that is

Posted by Nairi at AO

 

Lysa you are a goddess, this is amazing, loved the way you mixed the memories with the present timeline. Can´t wait to read more, please post again soon.

Posted by BECJANE at AO

QUOTE

“Aim not so good, Big Bad Vamp?” Cordelia chuckled as he missed again. “That’s not a very good sign considering you can’t even put the lock in my key.”

Angelus paused long enough to grumble a correction, “Key in your lock.”

“You can’t do it.”

“Can too.”

“Huh.”

Then he leered, adding with a waggle of his eyebrows, “I have a very big key.”

Sucking in a gasp of air, Cordelia remembered the way he felt against her. “Mmm. Yes, you do.”


Rather interesting metaphor

Like that you're filling in the blank of the missing scene with the flashbacks.

Brilliant as ever Lysa More soon please

Becky 

Posted by KIMMERS at AO

 

Lysa,
Truly truly brilliant can't wait for more polease write more soon
from Kim 

Posted by GILLY at AO

 

Mmmm Lysa, what a great part, hot, sexy and did I say hot??

I love the way you write the gang, especially A/C, looking forward to more

Posted by MANDERS-21 at AO

 

Lysa, you sure do know how to write outstanding ficage (my new made up word).

I especially like how you blend in characters that you usually don't see much of. Never watched Buffy, so don't really know much about Jenny Calendar, but it was an added bonus to have her in it. I would love to see more fics with her in it, just to at least have that "mature" female figure for them all to look up to. And good to see she was on Cordy's side too.

Can't wait to see where Cordy and Angel take it from here! Hopefully straight to the bedroom

Amanda 

Posted by RACHELLE at AO

 

LMFAO!!!!!! Buffy-bashing, yeah!

QUOTE

“There, there, Buffy, no tears,” Angelus mocked her as he stood shirtless and garbed only in that same pair of black sweatpants. “Everyone has their gift. Yours just does not seem to involve the ability to do anything except lay there and take it.”


More smut please?! 

Posted by ARKADY at ST

 

Oh boy! Finally details of the night in question. I'm enjoying this story so much and I can't wait to read more of it.

Posted by CALIFI at AO

 

Yummy, yummy, yummy, I got love in my tummy....

Lysa, you so rock I gotta lick you alll over- do you have 'Blackpool' through the middle?

Wonderful wonderful- I know I already told you that, but it bears saying agin *sigh*

If only I could write like you- if I didn't love you I'd hate you- HATE you, grrr ;


More please, babes

Cali xx 

Posted by LUCKYLYN at ST

 

Yay! a sequel. Loving Angel's Pov and looking forward to seeing Angel and Cordy get some more interaction. Post more soon.

Posted by ORCASNOWLEO at ST

 

"He didn’t care who was downstairs within hearing distance" Wow that sounded dangerous. Hope he doesn't get too loud. Update soon.

Niquole

Posted by CAMARTIN at ST

Aboso-furking-lutely fabulous!

Continue soon!

Posted by BUFFY_ANGEL2000

 

Absolutely fantastic start on the sequel!!!

I really loved Angelus, as well as the small change between his behavior and Angel's. The flashbacks were great, and I totally understand why they can't forget about each other.

Can't wait to see what they both do now. Post more soon please!

Posted by HELEN at AO

 

Lysa

OMG that was just WOW! Hot much, sheesh I've just reread it and my brain is seriously melted! I had to take a call right in the middle of that last part so I had a brain full of Cordy going down on Angelus while answering the damn phone, believe me I had trouble concentrating!

Fucking marvelous babe and I can't wait for the next installment, forget that excited doesn't come close- so hurry the hell 'kay

Helen 

Posted by MARIE at AO

 

This is so good, I don't know where to start

QUOTE

Buffy jerked on the chains again even though Angel hadn’t moved. “It’s obviously still Angelus.”

Duh, Buffy never could tell the two apart unlike Cordy.

QUOTE

“There, there, Buffy, no tears,” Angelus mocked her as he stood shirtless and garbed only in that same pair of black sweatpants. “Everyone has their gift. Yours just does not seem
to involve the ability to do anything except lay there and take it.”

 

Had to laugh at that. 

Won't quote any more or I'll end up quoting most of the chapter.

I liked the fact that Angel made reference to Buffy hitting Angelus.

I liked the way the dialogue between everyone flows so naturally regardless of whether it is snarky or not.

I love the fact that Jenny is there for Cordy.

Aww, you've got to love Angel's conflicting emotions

All in all a brilliant chapter.

Can't wait for next part.

Marie 

Posted by LIZS at AO

 

Lysa,

Glad to see you'll be posting more very soon, as I just can't wait to see what happens next! 

Posted by SOMETIMES TACTLESS at ST

 

This is just fantastic! Loved that Jenny is still alive in this story and that she and Cordelia have a friendship of sorts. Especially loved the Angel/Cordy interaction. These two have a sizzling intensity together. Please post more soon.

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Sammie 

Posted by SPUFFYNCASHIPPERGAL at ST

 

Oh. My. God. Very hot! I loved it, I've been checking for this and it didn't occur to me to check in the serial fiction part, duh! Anyways I really enjoyed hearing what they both remember from their night of passion, loved how peeved Buffy was, tee hee! I'm gonna go read the other part now

__________________
~**KRYSTLE**~

Posted by SI CRAZY at AO

 

Amazing start!!!! This is great!! I'm loving it!!!! Very hot!!!!!! 

Posted by KATRINA at AO

 

Loved this Lysa,

Brilliant. I was totally engrossed in every word, and when I stopped reading and looked around I was actually shocked to find myself in my office and not Giles flat.

I felt really bad for the way Cordy was shut out and ignored by the Scoobies, damn them. I'm so glad Angel is back with his memories of just how right he and Cordy are together. Yay.

Can't wait for more, which I know is ready and waiting for me woo hoo yay.

Hugs

Kat 

Posted by KIMMERS at ST

Lysa,

Ever since finishing DoN you've been on a roll girl. Another new fic maybe we should challenge you more often.
Cause you seem to work better that way, LOL
from Kim

Part 2 of 3 + epilogue

Posted by BIBLIOPHILE at ST

 

I'm so glad Angel called Buffy on her attitude and I loved the scene in the Bronze. Forceful Angel is yummy. Great chapter. Please post more soon.

__________________
Rachel 

Posted by BECJANE at ST

 

Hi Lysa

Came to read my own FB, but saw you'd posted and had to read this first.

Quote:

“Maybe the key’s too big.” and “Mmm. Master vamp, master key.”

Following on from my fave lines in the last part - loved these too

The smut was yummy and I liked Angel sticking up for Cordy with the Scoobies.

Quote:

That seemed strange. Guessing wildly, “Splinters in your ass from sitting on the stairs?”

My favorite line in this part, I think.

Can't wait for part 3

Hugs Becky 

Posted by ARKADY at ST

 

It's so much fun reading the Angelus/Cordy parts of this. It's also very, very hot. I can't wait to read what it'll be like at the Scooby meeting, it promises to be very interesting.

Posted by SUNSCORCHED at AO

 

Was about to go to bed seeing how it's 5:30 am but you had to go and post an update didn't you?!?

Damn you from keeping me from my beauty sleep, not that I need it you understand... Not one word from any of you!!

This fic is enjoyable on so many levels and I ain't just talking about the smut. The interaction between C/A is absolutely sublime and his gentlemanly act of walking her to her car and then wishing her pleasant dreams made me melt!

Can't wait to see what happens at the library when Cordy turns up because Angel wants her there. Sparks are sure to fly and I wanna ringside seat.

Next part anytime you like babes, just don't make me wait too long eh? 

Posted by VISION GIRL at AO

 

Gotta continue with this, this is such a great story. You have the characterzations pat down. 

Posted by UNREGISTERD GUEST at AO

 

Delightful. Filling us in on some C/Aus loving. Keep up with the slightly possessive Angel... it's more intriguing! Good stuff, chickie. 

Posted by RACHELLE at AO

 

Ah, pure magic!!!! Just for the fun of it, sometime in your story you need to have Buffy's butt kicked.. hard! It's her business to know about Angel's sex with the Cordelia goddess... uh, no. 

Posted by NAIRI at AO

 

Amazing chapter Lysa, loved the talk Angel had with the 3 headed monster , and the way he made sure Cordy would be back at the library for research. Can´t wait to read more, please post again soon.
Nairi 

Posted by BECJANE at AO

 

Already posted FB at ST, but just popping in here to say I loved it.

Can't wait for the C/A interaction in next part and the confrontation with the Scoobies.

Post more very soon.

Becky 

Posted by HELEN at AO

 

Lysa

I spotted this and jumped and it was soo good. Brilliant in fact that I'm lost to find the words to explain it without repeating myself! Angelus and Cordy smut was just phew!! hot as hell and boy am I red faced. Angel is just as hot and Buffy is just as defensive and confused as you'd expect. Cordelia is just wonderful, I love her every thought and sentence.

More soon!

Hugs, Helen 

Posted by KIMMERS at ST

 

Lysa,
You keep drawing us in a little bit at a time, and when we think that you can't put it off anymore you do but also while giving us something else at the same time.
from Kim

Posted by BUFFY_ANGEL2000 at ST

 

Great part!

I loved Angel sticking up for Cordy, and not taking Buffy's crap! Way to go Angel!

I'm glad Angel and Cordy seem to be getting along quite well, and I think it's probably actually a good thing they're not jumping straight back into things. Oh, and go Angel again for telling Cordy to come to the meeting, no matter what Buffy and Xander may say; that's certainly a scene I can't wait to see.

Post more soon please

Posted by LISAMARIE514 at ST

 

Lysa -

I loved it...now I am torn between writing my continuation to Car Trouble or going back and reading part one of this great story.

Thanks for the positive feedback, I really appreciate it from someone who writes as well as you do!

Lisa

Posted by CALIFIST at AO

 

Well, what can I say? as well as the usual joyness of seeing Lysa-fic on the board *g*

Enjoyed their pov's and totally understand Cordy's unwillingness to be second best. Should be fun when she turns up at the library, and i can see fireworks of the Buff kind- hope she is put well in her place. As to the B/A being well and truly put in the ground, I think that is up to Angel too to get it sorted before even thinking of moving on.

Can't wait for those two cats to get it on eventually- be interesting to see how different Angel is to Aus in the sack.

heeeee, one more to go and cannot wait!

Posted by MANDERS-21 at AO

 

Lysaaaah! You know one of the things I love about your writing is that when you give it, you give it the all.

Angel knows what he wants and is not afraid of showing it, every C/A fan's dream was just put onto paper right then. So thank you!

loved this so much, can't wait for the next part!

Amanda 

Posted by WRITINGPATHWAYS at ST

 

Quote:

They barely danced as the music played. Cordelia’s arms slipped around his broad shoulders pulling her body closer into his hard frame. Keeping his hands moving, Angel pressed his fingers along her back moving at a slow, sensuous pace up and down the length of her spine. Until one crept up to the nape of her neck, cupping her there and tracing the edge of her jaw with his thumb.

Cordelia knew her heart was beating a rickety tune and she kept forgetting how to breathe as she looked up at him, their eyes locked together as their bodies touched and moved with the rhythm of the music. She wanted his mouth on hers, to feel the weight of his kiss. For a moment, it appeared that she would get her way, but Angel came within a hair’s breadth of her lips and moved no closer.

He felt the whisper of Cordelia’s sweet breath upon his lips, causing Angel to realize what he was about to do. Slowly, reluctantly he pulled back.


Love that moment, just so full of tension and anticipation. Perfect. (well almost but him holding back was right for the moment)

Love that he's confused by how one night when he was Angelus ended up meaning so much to him, as well Cordelia's mixed reactions, though she's not denying the truth that she wants more to happen with the souled version of the man.

Also happy Angel's realizing that his Buffy Blindness made him miss Cordelia but now his eyes are wide open and that he's thinking of her beyond the narrow-focus everyone else has of her. And that he's feeling protective and wants her at the meetings.

Can't wait for more

Posted by IMPRESS at AO

 

um is part three ready yet? 

Posted by SOMETIMES TACTLESS at ST

 

Lysa, this is just wonderful. There was so much to love about this chapter. From the dream sex to Angel no longer playing Buffy's lapdog to the dance in the Bronze.

His feelings of conflict and guilt about his behavior as Angelus, his desire for Cordelia, and his ambivalence about Buffy were all intense. Loved the fact that while he obviously isn't ready to admit what (and who) he wants, he still automatically defends Cordy and wants her back with the Scoobies because he isn't ready to not have her in his life.

Please post more soon.

__________________
Sammie 

Posted by LUCKYLYN at ST

 

Way to build the tension. He should of just kissed her. I want more of this and soon. This is wonderful.

Posted by SPUFFYNCASHIPPERGAL at ST

 

Lysa, I just totally adore this whole story! I love every part of it, I actually believe its one of my fav C/A/Aus stories ever! I can't wait for more girl!

Posted by ANGELICLADYD

 

Lysa…I LOVE you! You write A/C/Aus like nobody’s business. Whoo *fans self off* I just read Double Take, and AHHHH! It just makes me love DoN even more. I still read it over and over and over and over again because it’s a classic. You are just amazing, and thanks for giving me something SO great to read. C/Aus is my FAVE and you knock it out of the park. Just keep up the good work. I need more All The Days like an addict needs crack.

Lady D

Posted by SI CRAZY at AO

 

Great chapter!!! This fic is awesome!!! I'm loving it!!!!! 

Posted by Kimmers at AO

 

Lysa,
Love this love this so much love the memories and the emotions that come through in this.
the Tension between Cordy and angel and the way angel doesn’t' like the way Buffy is treating Cordy
from Kim 

Posted by KATRINA at AO

 

Oh that was so wonderful *sigh*

QUOTE

Cordelia agreed knowing that she’d rather face Buffy and Xander any day than go another one without seeing him. “Okay.”

I love this line. I'm really enjoying the way Angel is seeing the things around him now, particularly Buffy and the way she treats others.

Off to read more. Yay

Hugs

Kat 

Part 3 of 3 + epilogue

Posted by LUCKYLYN at ST

 

That was a fantastic conclusion. I really loved how you wrote Angel and Cordy.

Posted by LISAMARIE514 at ST

 

Lysa -

I loved it loved it loved it. A great fic!

Thanks you 

Posted by FANG GIRL at AO

 

oh my Lysa this was so good nice follow through with all the plot points.... oh who am I kidding..

I love C/A in the Btvs years...... lol and a smutty finale to this would be a welcome addition.

Posted by SUNSCORCHED at AO

 

Yayness!!

QUOTE

His nights of excess were finally catching up with him. Angelus lay sprawled on the bed, his legs stretched out, one hand resting on his washboard stomach and the other curled around Cordelia’s shoulder as she contentedly snuggled into him.

That image turned me to mush. Love C/Aus snugglidge 

QUOTE

“Fuck, yes, baby,” Angelus found the thought of her teeth on him distracting. “Bite me.”

If you insist!

QUOTE

Cordelia let out a yelp at the sharp sensation, but moaned at the cool tongue lapping at her skin. It felt… she drifted down into a state of unconsciousness as sleep finally claimed her. Her vampire lover was equally exhausted, the effects of several nights of drinking seriously affecting his usual stamina.

With his head pillowed against her bottom, Angelus fell asleep.


LOL!! I adore the ass biting. Sure it's an unusual place for the vamp to plant his ownership but whatever floats his boat!

Yes, a perfect end to a perfect fic.

Thank you for yet another little gem Lysa, many hugs and much love. 

Posted by BECJANE at AO

 

Yay Lysa posted

QUOTE

With his head pillowed against her bottom, Angelus fell asleep.

LMAO at Angelus falling asleep using Cordy's bottom as a pillow!

QUOTE

Thinking about it for a second, Cordelia shook her head, “No, but he slimed me with his gross, evil tongue.”

Loved that line. Good that Buffy was surprisingly mature about the whole break-up thing too.

QUOTE

“Is it? I thought I counted a few more times than that.”

Brushing her cheek along side his, Cordelia met Angel’s melting gaze confessing with a mischievous laugh, “I’m tired of talking, Angel. Show me what it’s like to be yours. Again.”

Can't wait for the C/A epilogue

Hugs Becky 

Posted by MARIE at AO

 

Aww, a lovely ending. Nice to see Buffy being put in her place and being mature enough to deal with it.

Angelus using Cordys ass as a pillow made me LOL.

Marie 

Posted by DAMNSKIPPY at AO

 

I've seriously been lacking on the feedback, Lysa, and I'm sorry. I do so love everything you write. Nothing ever seems forced. It just flows like it couldn't be written any other way. And even things that I think might be OOC never are because you make them make sense. I think you could write Giles as a Chippendale dancer and I'd buy it hook, line and sinker.

I loved A Night to Remember and this fic so much. I could live in an AU where Cordy and Angel/us were drunk all the time and still able to bang like bunnies 24 hours a day. Why didn't JW write *that* TV show?

Anyway, I don't want to quote passages because I truly can't separate parts. It all works together as one painting that I can sit back and gaze at for hours.

And, yeah. I want the smut, too. Post as soon as you can!! 

Posted by MANDERS-21 at AO

 

Lysa loved it!!! can't wait for the Epilogue.

Amanda 

Posted by NAIRI at AO

 

Loved it, loved it and loved it. Lysa this was brilliant, sweet and with an amazing ending. Can´t wait to read the epilog, please post again soon.
Nairi 

Posted by CAMARTIN at ST

 

Quote:

Brushing her cheek along side his, Cordelia met Angel’s melting gaze confessing with a mischievous laugh, “I’m tired of talking, Angel. Show me what it’s like to be yours. Again.”

Dude!

Wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Sorry I didn’t leave more FB. But this was fantastic, hope to read more from you in the future.

Posted by CYPRESS at ST

 

Great job ...

Posted by KIMMERS at AO

 

Lysa,
Once again taking you took a challenge and made it into something brilliant.
I love how you ended it with Buffy and Angel, and also how you made The Scoobies see that Angel meant what he said.
This is truly a brilliant update and I can’t wait for the final CA bit i am sure knowing you and your mind that it will be truly brilliant
from Kim 

Posted by SPUFFYNCASHIPPERGAL at ST

 

Lysa, that ROCKED! I loved this whole fic, and even though you said its the end, I still am hoping for some more C/A smutty goodness but if not its cool b/c your fic is one I will be reading over and over, it was just so well written, I loved how well you captured each of the characters, great job! 

Posted by SOMETIMES TACTLESS at ST

 

Lysa, loved the ending (heck, I loved the whole fic). You blend humor, angst, and passion so seamlessly that I'm impressed and amazed. Your take on the Scooby characters made me nostalgic for the early years of BTVS (well, except for whiny Buffy), back before I really grew ambivalent about them all. Thanks so much.

__________________
Sammie 

Posted by GILLY at AO

 

Oooh Lysa this is great, umm I feel all warm and tingly, or I did until the vision of Giles in a thong popped into my brain.

What about leather clad Wesley- 'the stripping cop'. After being fired from the council, he had to make ends meet somehow??!!!

This fic is so wonderful I love the way you write everyone, so believable. Roll on the epilogue. 

Posted by CALIFIST at AO

 

*sigh* such a joy Lysa has delivered and what a deliverance it was!

Thanks for posting this, babes, and I loved the twist with Buffy agreeing too. A perfect ending to a perfect story, and cannot wait for more from you.....is it my challenge next, I wonder??? 

Posted by NICKLE at ST

 

i really like the way you write C/A....and i really like the way you write Angel/Angelus. Great job....


B

Posted by HELEN at AO

 

Lysa babe!

Dang late again, sorry I've been working like a dog with no home. Anyway Brilliant part, lovely long and totally delicious. Got me thinking too, especially the part about the bond between the three scoobs and Cordy not being a part of it- that is so true thinking back and yet so not true about Cordy and FG! Damn that got my heart constricting.

I also loved how Buffy dealt with Angel after the fight and admitting that they weren't tru wub after-all, brilliant I say again.

Can't wait for smutty finish!!!!

Don't work to hard ya here?

Hugs, Helen 

Posted by BUFFY_ANGEL2000 at ST

 

Yay, no more Buffy!!!

I really loved how Angel reacted to Cordy in this part, especially that he's now with her. The way you wrote the Scoobies' reaction to Cordy re-joining the gang was great, and I'm glad Buffy ended up accepting it, if not too willingly.

This was a great part! Can't wait to read more!

Posted by SI CRAZY at AO

 

Amazing chapter!!!! As usual I loved this fic!!!! And also as usual, you did a great job!!! 

Posted by KATRINA at AO

 

That was just wonderful. I join in with Gilly in that I felt so warm and tingly and all fuzzy until I read about Giles and his man boobs (thanks for the image Deb and Lysa) and then my warm fuzzy rapidly departed. LMAO.

This was such a wonderful fic Lysa and I loved the biting on the ass part, so thanks to Scorch for the idea.

Off to read the epilogue.

Hugs

Kat 

EPILOGUE

Posted by HELEN at ST

 

Heya babe

Couldn't get on AO for some reason and then saw this and felt better! Wow what a superb end to a brilliant fic. So sweet with them talking and snuggling then whoo boy getting it on with the hot sizzling not missing a single spot smut!
Wonderful babes, so what's next?

hugs, Helen

Posted by NICKLE at ST

 

Cordelia started to lift her hips, but Angel brought them down hard holding them steady, his cock steel encased by her velvet heat again. Finally, he said, “I want everything you have to give. Your kisses…,” Angel closed his mouth over hers for another passionate kiss, “the heat of your skin…,” and then trailed his large hands over her flesh, “and your sex…,” before running his thumb through her moist curls to circle her clit, “but I want your heart, Cordy. Can I have that too?”

Oh, man....following the smut up with the sweet....you delivered, and more. Wonderful conclusion to a great story, Lysa. I love the theme of Angel/Angelus being two separate identities, but being necessarily entwined through not only sharing the body, but Cordelia. Really well done. Thanks for a great read.

B

Posted by WRITINGPATHWAYS at ST

 

So, sweet. So, very sweet.... I mean SWEET.

I just can't say more than that. I just love this from the first story, to the follow up, to this epilogue. I love this AngelCordyVerse. Sigh.

Posted by CALIFIST at AO

 

God, Lysa, that was truly wonderful. So much intensity- which you know I love to bits, and the smut was out of this world. I bow before you, baby

Wonderful end to an amazing fic.

Thanks for posting. 

Posted by CORDELIA'S DESTINY at AO

 

Wow, Lysa! This was so good. I finally caught up on my reading and I'm so glad I did! I loved the butt bite. Too funny. and very sweet, the way it all came out. And Jenny Calendar survived. Yeah! Can't wait for more of your stuff.

Jules 

Posted by NAIRI at AO

Lysa this is for you, after all a queen needs her crown, don´t you think. Anyway this was an brilliant, hot and romantic ending to a wonderful fic. I loved it and i love the fic picture as well, it really tells a story of it´s own. Thank you again and can´t wait to read more of your work.

Nairi  

Posted by BECJANE at AO

 

LMAO Nairi !!!

Although Queen Lysa - or was that Empress? ;)  definitely deserves her crown

Becky 

Posted by DAMNSKIPPY at AO

 

I didn't want to read this while I was at work because of the turn-on factor, but I couldn't wait. And holy hell was that good and hot. I really like it when there's some dirty talk and this part almost had me panting and heaving like an idiot.

QUOTE

Rising above her, Angel held her hips and legs in place as his tumescent cock butted up against her swollen sex. He licked his lips, tasting her there as he slowly entered her, pushing his way into her tight body until he made it all the way home encased by her hot, intimate embrace. It felt like he belonged there. Inside her.

“I’ve been dreaming about this,” Angel’s words came forth on a guttural moan as she gripped him from within, her body holding on as he worked his hips back and forth. “With you tight…” he stroked inside her, “and hot…,” he pulled out until only the tip stretched her, “and wet around me,” and then sank deep.

“To have you inside me,” Cordelia echoed the thought. She’d certainly dreamt of that again and again. “Oh, Angel, please.”

Angel gazed down at the juncture of their bodies, his sex glistening with her milky nectar as he thrust inside her tight grip. Her body clasped his, hands reaching out for him, but he held his position straight as he pistoned back and forth, wanting to look at her first as he fucked her. Watching them merge, their hips coming together with increasing force, watching Cordelia’s bright eyes and her parted mouth and the way her hair spread out over her shoulders and the bed beneath her only made him want her more.


Whew. Good thing my boss is out of town.

Thank you, thank you for giving us what we want AND need. 

Posted by KIMMERS at AO

 

Lysa,
My hat is off to you girl that's just wow i sat here as i had an early nite thinking oh i might read that and wow once i sat down i couldn't stop.
I think that your after scorchy's crown because girl this rocks.

Truly brillant it's great and i love it

from Kim 

Posted by LISAMARIE514 at ST

 

Lysa -

What a brilliant naughty fic. I loved it...need a fan in here it is so hot!

Angel was so yummy....he can bite me anytime he wants.

LM

Posted by SUNSCORCHED at AO

 

Your usual standard of smut, hot and well worth a good old fashioned re-read

The smutty talk put a nice grin on my face as you can well imagine!

QUOTE

“Geez, what more can you possib— ohgeezohyeah!” Coherent thought crumbled into a million pieces as he sucked her clit into his mouth.

Ask and thou shalt receive heehee!!

Have to admit that the never-ending smooching at the beginning made me wibble. Can just imagine C/A being constantly attached at the lips, such a lovely image.

Thanks for a smashing piece babes and I'm looking forward to your next piece more than ever!!!! 

Posted by GILLY at AO

 

Ummm Lysa, great fic and hot, hot and I repeat HOT smut., cold shower needed

I loved every part of this, still cooling down, a bit hard with the temp here in the 70's

Looking forward to your next fic. 

Posted by SPUFFYNCASHIPPERGAL

 

Lysa, my god it just keeps getting better, and hotter! I love this CordyAngel verse too! It's addicting! I hope you loved writing it b/c I sure loved reading it, from start to finish it was a sweet, naughty, fluffy fic all rolled into one, awesome job!

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~**KRYSTLE**~

Posted by LUCKYLYN at ST

 

I love how you manage to put together great smut and great romance.

Posted by SI CRAZY at AO

 

Great end!!! Just the way I thought this should end!!! Very hot!!!! 

Posted by NICKLE at AO

 

I just went through and reread this, and wanted to tell you how much I absolutely love this story. You are one who really gets Cordy, and how her strengths fed Angel's. Her nonchalant acceptance of the bite, and all that it entailed, including the scar, tells Angel, and the reader, all he needs to know about Cordy. This was a really well done story, and well plotted out.

*s*

fine, now i must worship at your feet.

Posted by KATRINA at AO

 

Lysa,

Truly hot and sweet and wonderful. *sigh* just perfect, you so deserve that cute little red chair crown, I love it, its adorable, and its little gold feet are soooo cute.

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Being with Angel touched her heart and Cordelia knew that if she wanted anything in the all the days and nights he promised would follow, it was his love.

Aww that was so beautiful, I'm just a big giant softy and you've made me all melty.

Thanks for such a great fic.

Hugs

Kat 

Posted by BECJANE at AO

 

Brilliant smutty end to a faboo fic, Lysa 

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Blood rushed like thunder in Cordelia’s ears as Angel told her precisely what he planned to do with her body and his tongue. She moaned at the way her body clenched and ached in anticipation of it. Angelus hadn’t done that before. No one had ever done that.

Although Angelus & Cordy were hot, it was kind of nice that he gave her something that was just Angel.

QUOTE

Being with Angel touched her heart and Cordelia knew that if she wanted anything in the all the days and nights he promised would follow, it was his love.

              So onto the next challenge...

You've been giving us such a variety of fics to enjoy, I can't wait for the next one.

Hugs Becky  

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